This story is unique, though... I would like to see what the princess see in her kingdom when she said it was beautiful. Great first chapter! It made me urge to read more what happen after their encounter... We love a strong female character!Keep up the good work, I love to see this world more.
it looks good so far, i have great expectations in this fic hope i enjoy later like now. we have a russian mc, russian womens, the motherland will provide us with all we need to enjoy a apocalyptic party until mc dies of old along his russian supermodels harem, who dont want the sexy blondes with blue eyes? i do.
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one of the worst i have read. reader says its a copy paste story, so? the original is also like this? ?????????????????????????????
Very unique story with a fast changing narrative of a persons rise from bottom to top. Hopefully Jermey finds answers and finds out more about this so called “god” in the future. Anyways thanks for the awesom read!
After reading the synopsis, I instantly wonder how the story would go. If Den would be able to survive in the new world especially with his low status, or if he wouldn’t make it and will just die helplessly. The first chapters were written well, there were no doubts about that. The story develops at a comfortable speed with good insight on motivations and goals that keeps the whole book entertaining to read. Overall, I would say that the writing quality, update frequency, story development, characters were excellent. The world-building was also done very well, and I really enjoy how the story evolves. I truly hope that this book will do well. Good luck to you, Author.
aya i need to call my fish headed friend. SRYSLY AUTHOR I WANNA LOCK YOU UP AND FORCE YOU TO WRITE TILL YOU WITHER..........................................................................................................................
As the one how wrote this Web novel I admit that it has flaws but I don't think it matters the story is entertaining and that's what matters the most. I don't think any one is here to read about some deep filosofical ideas and principles.English isn't my first language so please excuse the horrible speling. Give it a try and you'll see if it's something for you or not.
An action-packed novel, cultivation, and rich world background. We start the adventure of the mc. The fight scenes are good and the story is quite engaging. Keep up the work and good luck!
Hello guy's/girl's and whoever else is out there, I writing a review in hopes that this novel gets more attention, so far the story has been hilariously funny, at the same time it's been making me rage and cry in anger at the same time, the characters in the story especially the goddess has been trolling the mc since the beginning of the story, it's gotten so bad that even a coldblooded killer couldn't help be feel sorry for him, but of course that doesn't stop the goddess from giving him thorny early birthday gifts. But that's not all this story has to offer, so far the character design/development has been outstanding Rika, Orthis(i'm not sure i spelled his name right), Risa, and Sahria, has had the most character development so far, I've read far enough to read to a recent chapter where it looks like the love interest has appeared (this may go down the Yuri route after all, i mean he's still is a man at heart). The only thing it leads a little more of, is the world building, I have heard a little bit about what happened in the world, such as to why the racism between beastkin, and humans are so bad, but I have yet to get a general layout of the world on a Large scale view, such as to what kingdom, fiefdom, or area of the world he(she) currently lives in, or is whether or not that town is the only one that treats the beastkin like slaves or is it on a International scale. other than that, you can honestly say this novel has little to no flaws, and I'm really/seriously/honestly/hopefully looking forward to more chapters in the future.
For those of us climbing to the top of the food chain, there can be no mercy. There is but one rule: hunt or be hunted...On Earth, one had to be mindful of rumors, it was easy to ruin a person's life with some malicious lies. It's because we are all mortals, the laws of the world are different, and individuals could not surpass the power of society.But not here.
The story is very good. it's interesting and thrilling with each part ahead.. I strongly support and suggest the writer to continue writing and know that you have ur supporter's backing u and encouraging u ahead..