It looks like the author has great direction and drive for this story. POV switches are well on-point with each perspective not being wasted on characters and that the story progresses well under a well written world. Not to mention that the writing quality is highly commendable, I can see this novel going up in a few months time. Keep it up author!
This got potential ngl! The story is good. I love how each chapter ends with a cliffhanger. The MC had some good development in these chapters. Only problem is pacing. It is little slow. I might increase the rating if the pacing is fixed till now 4.6.
You know, if he want to, he can eat us in one bite.
"Didn't I already mention it earlier? Yes! Creating! We will create someone who is strong in the human world.
Okay, it's time to go to school.
'Soon, we will know'. Somehow, Eric also wanted to battle even if his ability is for scouting.
Izuku was extremely eager to know. He's had no choice but avoid everyone in his life and stay indoors. "I don't know. I'm sorry, Izuku" He looked down at his feet "I-I'm so sorry Izuku." Inko started to cry "I'm so sorry..." Izuku took a hold of his mother's hands and said to her. "Its okay mama, I'm lucky to have a mom like you." Then he hugged his mother.
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"don't move or I'll kill you both" the scary man said as he motioned for her parents to sit down.
"what a question viene you know...yes because she's my bff"
The group had followed Rias to a hot spring within the Gremory territory, soon enough the girls went one way and the boys went another into their respective changing area and baths.
Her about the rings…