I realy like the story but the grammar is Something to chew on. You want to read a book/Story and dont want to rage about grammar mistakes.
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this is a great novel, with a very interesting concept, and a lot of potential.i am looking foward to see how things will happen and how the characters will develop.
I thought the story was really good overall. I liked the world building both in the origin expanse and outside. The kingdom building aspect was very interesting to me.. idk why some hated it, but to each their own.. that being said my only gripe is Michael's family situation.. it dampens the quality of the story imo. The conflict felt a bit forced and it gave me the feeling that the author himself is confused on how to handle the family (again this is the feeling I get) I'm gonna assume the author is cooking up something regarding the family dynamic cause otherwise it's a really poor resolution to me. I'm also about 920 chapters in so I'm not saying this part to be spiteful.
GOOD NOVEL! I LOVE THIS, THIS IS THE BEST ONE OF A KIND NOVEL. PYRO ON TOP.
Interesting premise of a Tower Defense game and the shenanigans that the MC gets up to while being the overlord for his city/tower defense. MC has the fairly typical archetype of being a scrooge while having some innovative ideas and getting by on a decent bit of luck.The character development currently is a bit shallow but it is mainly the world building phase with a number of different people interacting with the MC so it is understandable.The MC is a bit unique as his goal within the game is not to earn money - honestly one of the first gamer novels when the MC isn't ridiculously poor/greedy. The MC instead is 'casual' and aiming to have fun which shows in the novel in later chapters with some unique developments. The only issues I can really see is the some pretty thick plot armour with the MC getting some quite valuable things very early on - so for people looking at this review I would recommend to not take things to realistically. The other issue is the setup for outside the game is a bit dull with the dialogue usually the standard tropes you see in Chinese web novels - doting 'aunt' type character, person looking down on MC etc.The translator has done a good job with a fair balance presented between keeping Chinese slang/proverbs which provides some charm to the novel and keeping things digestible for a western audience.If you are into video game novels I would say check this out and I hope that this novel gets picked up as I am looking forward to future updates!
The author knows that he is writing a fanfic but from the couple of chapters I read he did a good job adding his vision on the warcraft world.I hope people understand what fanfics are and they do not get stuck on stuff like ... he missed some lore or changed stuff to much ....
Good book u should read this it had me hooked i loved this story could not stop reading this book until my mom made me do chorus u should definitely read this novel
10/10 best novel I have ever read aside from Library of Heaven's Path and I am Really A Superstar. Zuo Mo and Ai Hui from World Of Cultivation and Avalon of The Five Elements would be so proud of both master and disciple.After a bet goes awry, a master becomes a meat toilet for her only disciple to realize that he prefers another girl and frees her from the bet. After having odd feelings of expecting to be ravaged but then rejected, she goes on to become the best money grubber the world has ever seen. She was a god, he was the world. A World Only God Knows.
i read a few chaps and its quite good, it is a worth read while staying at home. though the system only gives him a sword yearly... that means for a 100 swords, he needs to wait for 100 years.. and thats tooo freakin' long.. but its a fast build, he is 2 years and he is already merciless, and i love that. its unlike those self-claimed justice heroes that dont kill... and after a few days, he found his woman dead, killed by the person he spared.
A rushed ending and quite a bit of loose ends left. Nothing surprising, just like most chinese novels. The story progression is ok. Not a bad novel to kill time i guess.