CHAPTER 124, FEELS LIKE AUTHOR RAN OUTTA IDEAS AND REPEATED THE SAME THING FROM PREVIOUS CHAPTERS, LIKE WTH MAN DIDN'T LIU ALEADY PAINTED HEAVENLY COURT FOR YU? AND SHE ALREADY GIFTED IMMORTAL JADE AND DIDN'T LIU TAKE YU AS A MAID? EVERYTHING SEEMS MESSY LIU TOOK YU AND OTHER GIRLS AS MAID AND LEFT THEM BEHIND AND THAT'S OK BUT AFTER EVERYTHING IS MESSED UP FEELS LIKE READING A DIFFERENT NOVEL BUT WITH SAME MC AND SC'S.
Are you sure this is an Original and not a newly translated masterpiece?
This was the 1st original works that I've tried and it blew my mind.
The MC is witty, charming and brutal all rolled into one. The females are written in a respectable slutty yet innocent way.
What i was expecting was a semi ***-addict harem story, yet what was received is a genuine dual cultivation novel that no one knew they were missing. Cant praise the Author enough. This is pure genius! I can see this story going far!!
This is gonna be good. I'll be waiting for more chapters to be release. I'm very eager to read it now but not until it reaches 800 chapters..lol...kinda hate cliffhangers and the feeling of always waiting and anticipating what will happen next.
You know what I like it. You have to write more chaps coz this is a good story. And your a good writer btw.I'll put this on my library and comment from time to time to support you haha so please update a little faster. *wink wink*
Y DOESNT JUST ABOUT EVERYONE PUT BUTTERFLYS IN HERE?? THEY SUCK REPLACE IT WITH A FOX AND THE CROW REALLY?? Y BOTH OF THESE R STUPID PUT SOMETHING ELSE IN!!
what's the raw name, idk how u could be this confident making contract when the translation is not that great still lot a mistake here and there but nonetheless the story has potential
New novel from the author of Ancient Godly Monarch (AGM), that is already translated here. Rating seems 9,4 on QI so i'm looking forward to read his new book.
Mc is super rich but the drawback is that character depends much on the system rather than his own comprehension. Other than that there story for other characters also. Other than that pretty good start for a face slapping story.
Not a terrible concept, but your grammar leaves much to be desired. Consider taking a few days off to edit your entire story. Also consider creating a table of contents and/or an addendum of power levels.
Hello everyone, this is the author here giving his thanks after publishing 200 chapters in total. I appreciate everyone that had given their support on my take of a VRMMORPG Novel that is quite different than most. And by that case, there are some that didn't enjoy it and I'm sorry that the novel isn't to your liking.
Now let's go over to what I think are my pros and cons.
For Pros: This novel takes the slow-pace route because I'm trying my best to weave a storyline that actually kind of make sense and not rushed things. Hence, some might mistaken me as trying to increase word count or stall purposely to earn more money, but that's not true. I'm really trying my best to write this VRMMORPG genre novel as it's my first attempt ever writing one, so it's given that not everything is perfect. I can only pray that you will give me a chance to improve my writing crafts.
For cons: My novel doesn't focused heavily on the player grinding daily but actually brings in some reality to it, and for that, it might bore some readers because I convey the real world and game world. In addition to that, there might be plot holes occasionally since author is a human being too and tends to forget some of the things he wrote. For that, I would be grateful if readers would kindly remind the author and not blast him right away for forgetting things.
TLDR: This is written by the author in March 3, 2023 to give his appreciation and thanks toward the readers that have continuously support me.
Three keywords: Opium, Cocaine and Marijuana. People think that in a war, sowing and reaping for lunch is the rule. Is not. After the first battle, soldiers spend more time wanting to flee the next battle than anything else.
Very solid novel with good plot and characters, decent grammar, good pace n stable updates.
I would 100% recommend it to anyone, you are not going to regret reading this one, its one of the best novels on this platform n deserve wayyyyy more recognition.