You wrote a great story Man gotta give it to you, I like Karma's attitude towards others. you should have this animated into a perfect anime
The world-building is steady, engaging, and thoughtfully constructed, drawing me in with its richness and detail. It sets a strong foundation, sparking curiosity and creating a vivid backdrop for the unfolding story. I’m impressed with how immersive it feels so far and can’t wait to see what comes next!
Tell me when this novel becomes an anime!
wow someone uploaded this many chapters kudos to you
Going good now...Don't know about future
Nice premise. Looking forward to how the story will develop. Hope author continues to update more chapters
This was a top tier name to begin with, nice designs to attract the eye. Already exciting format done in the most professional way possible. Nothing a miss and def would give this a long term read! Tower of Yaggdrasil rolls off the tongue making think automatically its gonna be fantasy of some sorts. Has light novel vibes which is banger!
It’s a good underrated novel. The author does one thing that pisses me off and that’s nerf the mc. It doesn’t make sense for him to spend over 100 chapters on level 299. It seems you only use adaptive evolution to prolong his leveling and slow him down. I know he can get stronger while still being stuck but it is not the same. Keeping him below grandmaster for so long doesn’t really provide anything for the story.
ya know this novel is just a spin off of a different novel
Yong sa Novelah ako nag-aantay pero dito ako maghahasik ng lagim. Wala talagang kwenta comments don, nakakasira ng scenes
I am a new writer, so this is my first book. I would like to know what everyone thinks about it, so please read it and leave a comment! Every bit of advice or suggestions is greatly appreciated.
I have only problem with one thing and that is your strong hold or your foundation is not strong on your story everything else is really good I mean really good it's just you are taking your story in fast way that's also good thing but you are not developing your main characters feeling not telling us how he feels because if you want to make your correct likeable by everybody you have to show some kind of emotions like anger soup your tea complex and defeating his own emotion by some kind of incident everything, this way he can understand and we can understand that he is developing in the story even though he has power he should understand or you should make us feel that is this character is real in our imagination and the story by showing us or letting us feel his emotion bye elaborating every small details if you can in his life that way you will make your story better even better than this is right now