it is a nice story with a promising storyline set in a modern yet magical city :)
Interesting start and looks promising. Hope for regular updates
The protagonist of this work does not know what diplomacy and restraint are in relation to other lords with whom he may well conclude an alliance and there is a feeling that this character does not understand that he has not achieved anything on his own and all he has is all thanks to the system and in fact not his and he should have thought at least once that if everyone gave it to him so easily, then they can take it away with the same ease, well, no, this character is so stupid that he makes enemies where he could make good friends
I like the way you describe the world and the details .Not many authors focus on giving a good world background and lots of details since they think is boring.But I think your book has enough details and backgrounds .I enjoyed reading it even thought I am not into system novels .Keep going ! Love you !
To everyone that reads this: I'm writing out of fun and im not from England, Amerika etc where you speak english so please forgive me if you see some grammar mistakes or something.I would also be really grateful if you write some feedbacks so that i can see how i can improve myself. Thanks
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This is actually a very interesting novel so far and got me hooked . Grammar is a little bad but still understandable so it's alright for now. Seems good until now and I hope it grows into another big thing because this seriously have a lot of potential. And I am not very good with English either so... yeah it's all good in my eyes . Keep it up author.
I like the story however it's a bit too slow, also democracy is basically mob rule where large demographics in citus will always have more voting power than rural minorities in it thus oppression to minorities rise, a Republic like the United states where their system offers fairness and equality in elections basically is more feasible and just in a cultivation world, people who call the UK or USA a democracy know nothing as they are balanced Republics
We have a talented author here, who knows how to write and executive powerful Main character(Mc) excellently.His previous novel ,Harry Potter fanfiction, breaks most of the cliches in overpowered character stories.Recently, I started to dislike overpowered characters in cultivation novels because in all those novels plot progression is the same(initial plots just way too similar to each other), that is, most of the MC's just cultivate till 1st realm 6th or 7th or 8th stage then a antagonist of 2nd realm comes to fight him. In this fight, Mc will either lose(not die by plot armor) or win(by plot armor). In this novel, Mc goes into close door Cultivation until he becomes 2nd realm then he comes out to face his enemies. This is very refreshing change for me.I once again started to like overpowered characters in Cultivation novels. Only problem with this author is his chapter release rate. Please give this author more support and don't use his novels for stupid experience.
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A really thought provoking and at times darker look into the criminal psyche. this story really does give a very raw and intriguing perspective from the mind of the main characters. Eternus, Gum and Port are some of my favoritss to read. Both a dark humor and thrilling fight scenes makes it a very enjoyable story and leaves you wanting to learn more of the world and backstories for these characters. Looking forward to the next chapter