Well, huhhh...this is my honest opinion for you author.While reading your plot from chapter 1 till 58 (so far), sometimes I wonder if you forgot that the MC is but a background character. If you want to make the MC as the "second protagonist" please make a step by step growth. I mean, many cases in the story just feels to forced by inserting the MC in order to highlight his existence.
i haven't even read it yet but I'm going to read all 100 of these chapters just for you. I'm currently in the process of trying to make my own novel for WN and I would atleast like someone to do this much for me. sorry it didn't go well but I'm sure regardless of the preferences of WN users this novel is great
I love this book. The author has my support. Keep it going. ?????????????????????????????????????????
What a great read! This is a plot that I’ve come across before, but, I have to say, this author does it best!! He/she is able to capture the essence (or close enough) of what an assassin should be and not just pick and choose their skills and traits. FL’s assassin persona seamlessly transfer over into her new life(character) without losing any traits or characteristics of her old life. I like the fact that she is still a cold and aloof person even as an 8 yr old. Our FL is a baddie!! I like how her emotions are slowly introduced to use and doesn’t just change drastically. A journey to survive in this new world, where her character grows to protect the ppl she eventually come to care for. Now, if only the pace would pick up a tad bit faster! ?
loving the novel so far. would love to see a chapter or few detailing the lore of the two worlds at some point, like is there anything more than the walled city or what happened in the early days of the war with the elves. maybe even a few details about the elves world just so we have a better understanding of what might be happening in the worldd even of the Mc doesn't.
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~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Just a few chapters in and I am already looking forward to reading more of this. Hope it will be different from others. ~~~~~~~~~~~~
As usual, Sloth's work never ceased to amaze his readers. Follow Layn if you love the genre. I was reading the book from chapter 13 before reverted back to chapter 4 - 5 - 6 for the new kind of language sloth created just for the sake of his novel. And then, I return to chapter 1 again to savor the beginning of the story once again.This won't be the last of lazy sloth. It's a masterpiece.
I love the cover page. Very original and catchy. Great synopsis. Thoughtful, short and encouraging to read.I am not a fan of fantasy, but I read (for the moment just a few chapters) your story with pleasure ;) You can definitely write! :) A nod to your imagination and creativity. You've successfully created a different reality. The plot is captivating!I wish I could have more free time to follow all the novels I started to read ;)
Ah yes, the infamous Zap and Medusa.I don't know how I got hooked on your novel this easily. Prob because I play League. Take my five stars. Damn you.Jokes aside, I couldn't find anything wrong with the novel. Real thoughts, fluid conversations, toxic adcs... Everything feels so real. There's nothing to criticize for me.Patiently waiting for new updates.
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