well..this is a really interesting book. the main mc is different which is nice. the flow is good . minor adjustment with commas and it will be good.
The story was really good. But when you get to the arc where they’re searching for the tomb with the necklace. The entire thing becomes extremely forced and the mcs personality changes from calm, cold and ruthless to embarrassed worried for enemies that stole from him and pathetic.Completely ruined.
This novel seems a face slapping novel with a few killings if needed. The mc tries to act as elegant and cool as much as possible, leaving those who have tried to kill him alone while trying to act cool slapping their faces and only will he try to kill someone if the plot requires it. Although the mc is ruthless and dominating, unfortunately, he's literally the type of a carefree old monster who doesn't end all troubles immediately but instead will let the troubles come to him. He wasn't the typical ruthless mc like from 'The Man in Hell' which would start a massacre. So, his ruthlessness is okay but not enough to be called brutal to cruelty like the mc in 'The Man in Hell'.
Overall, the novel is good especially if there's smut in this in the future.
What I only don't like is that there's absolutely little to none killings in 60 chapters. What died is just a random character like servants which is truly ridiculous in the 60 chapters.
So I believe this novel will have thousands of chapters due to how slow the story is.
i wish i could give "ZERO" stars. its not original. its a complete copy of the novel sharing shame name by the author "flaying de lazy cat".
The story seems like it would be interesting but after a few chapters I can continue reading. The grammar is as bad as MTL website, It hurts my head and gets truly annoying, even more so when you actually start getting into the story and plot but have no idea what's happening.All I can say is if you really want to spread this story use grammarly at the very least, that's why people come to this site and put up with the bullshit rankings and crappy stories because the grammar is in general (not always) up to par.
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awesome book. grabs you at the beginning and then keeps the ******* while explaining the development.
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This story is lit! I gotta say I'm impressed! With talent and skills accompanied with hard work, this will fare well in the future! Kudos and congrats! from Review swap......
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