It is an amazing story, I am totally hooked, Can not wait for the first part. Hopefully it will come soon. I totally recommend it. :) read it right now!
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A great novel and the protagonist of the story is a perfect villain He plays with the world on his hands As the sons of luck reap them and throw them ❤️
dear author I'm going to be honest with you I really like the story development and even the fact that you let your readers create the image of your main character can be overlooked but. . . you should seriously think about stopping the releases for a while and fix the already posted chapters because at the start your grammar mistakes were bearable but instead of improving you worsened the quality of your writing. . .I have to literally guess what you were trying to say in certain lines and you often use wrong words if you use autocorrect turn it off and if you're not using it then turn it on I don't know what to say. . .aside from that you have poor description of the world background like you only say that the place is really beautiful, there are some ruins, a forest and that's it dude turn on your imagination if not just the readers for some pointers this app is not just for posting chapters also the character development is too fast like in just 10 short chapters the main character is akin to a boss also you haven't described the characters at all aside from the small details like their hair length, hair color, eye color and their gender and instead of describing their cloths you always use robes. . . you can't fool us?I honestly don't want to drop this book because it has potential just work on it and your writing.
The story has a good start, the comic timing is weird but always on point so that's not a problem. Main character has a good story and interesting mental set up, it will be interesting to see him fall in love. This novel has true potential, let's see what the author does next. Best of luck!
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I give one big, fat stamp of approval to thee, sir! Very much a treat to read, due in no small part to your excellent writing skills, and I DO so love a wild, bonkers concept for a story such as this. Keep it up!
Its indeed is very good story, i love how THINGS were going in this novel, you are doing great work brother, i hope your book will do great.
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don't you think no nowadays author can give proper title like it used to 5 years ago ......................................................
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