the character design of this story is so POOR !! & the armor plot is so BIG that i can´t deal with it anymore and dropped the novel.......................... :/
THIS STORY IS FUTURISTIC IN EVERY FORM filled with twists and turns and the translator and you have both done a great job i must say, i am in love with the mc and supporting characters, PLOT TWISTS Major ones!C O M P L E T E L Y UNPREDICTBLE
i like it, the story is simple but not predictable.. like for example i would expect a certain character would surely die or be killed by mc at that moment, but mc would actually not kill them yet, or sometime i would think that that character would surely live a little bit longer, but then mc would suddenly kill them, i like it when story is not going the way i think it would.. that all i can say anything more would be a spoiler
It looks like webnovel auto hides reviews with bad language in it? Had to change some stuff before it registeredHey author. Sorry if this seems like a scathing review.Seems? No, it is. This novel is so terr1ble, I wonder just how many review swaps you had to go through in order to get this rating. If you didn't do any review swaps, then congratulations, because this novel is so bad that you would have just done the impossibleWriting Quality: 2 stars. Each paragraph is over ten sentences long. Sentence flow is nonexistent. Cohesive dialogue? Never heard of it. There were several instances in a single chapter where the sentence count of a paragraph easily reached the thirties, sometimes even forties, in one huge infodump or the other. 2 starsStability of Updates: 2 stars. Don't get me wrong, the updates are consistent. Which is why I gave it two stars instead of one. This author piles ten chapters on the reader, every sixteen days. Imagine you, a reader, getting an update for this novel. You've forgotten the plot. You've forgotten the characters. You've moved onto other novels in your life. You don't want to experience reading through ten tedious chapters, sift through all the story pieces the author brings back in their terr1ble chapters. For more information on 'terr1ble', see the writing quality star rating. 2 stars for both.Story Development: See if I care. You tell me. Try to read at least ten chapters of it. I'll pay you ten bucks to summarize the story for me. Tell me how much of your life you spent trying to decipher the author's page of infodump.Character Design: 3 stars. Generic Medieval plot, hiding under a pretense of originality. But I don't have time to play house with it.World Background: 2 stars. Infodump. Infodump. Infodump. Infodump. Infodump. Infodump. Infodump. Infodump. Infodump. Did I ever tell you that some sentences are over thirty sentences long? This novel's world, no, *any* novel's world isn't interesting enough for a reader to sit through a thirty sentence paragraph explaining the rinky-dink politics and intricacies of the world.Before I get ripped a new one in the comments, I suggest this: Read it yourself. Whether you are the author or a reader, just read the novel. Get to chapter five, and take this quiz. What is the plot? Describe the characters. How fun was your read? It doesn't matter if you can do the first two. The answer to the last one is no.And author, don't bother deleting this review.
Its racist novel like super eel. Its ****S⁴The thing is it does not MATTTTEEERRR if they are not spying on us now. Because eventually they will. They are a state owned company. That state is a communist regime that this hellbent on slaughtering theirr own people from practicing some Chinese yoga. Fung gong. And that's not even mention the weger Muslim population. They are anything but a good government. And they have ambitiouns to conquer the world. Aka belt and road initiative. Military ports on foreign nations. Now why would you want that government to handle something so volatile? I don't care what you think about the us. They have done more good than bad from defeating the nazi to japan . And give me one time china did that was on the same level?As for your video you are stupid. Can't even comprehend something so simple.Trump said that if China were to propose a new trade deal Huawei would surely be included in it. As china puts great importance to its tools like Huawei.The thing is it does not MATTTTEEERRR if they are not spying on us now. Because eventually they will. They are a state owned company. That state is a communist regime that this hellbent on slaughtering theirr own people from practicing some Chinese yoga. Fung gong. And that's not even mention the weger Muslim population. They are anything but a good government. And they have ambitiouns to conquer the world. Aka belt and road initiative. Military ports on foreign nations. Now why would you want that government to handle something so volatile? I don't care what you think about the us. They have done more good than bad from defeating the nazi to japan . And give me one time china did that was on the same level?As for your video you are stupid. Can't even comprehend something so simple.Trump said that if China were to propose a new trade deal Huawei would surely be included in it. As china puts great importance to its tools like Huawei.
What a great novel ruined by a terrible translator. Extremely sporadic releases even during premium.Will definitely be a fun read for people until you catch up
I really enjoyed it, more or less the same feeling of top tier providence but even more low key (and more OP system), I don't see this novel as a cultivator going against the heavens but more like slice of life of a growing top tier expert
MC is too passive, OC as romance, MC transforming into a woman all these things make you lose the motivation to keep reading (Because you already can see what will happen and it's not good)
So whenever he sleeps, he becomes Cthulu? That means that this is half a monster protag novel. Although the mc isn’t really a monster, I’m satisfied with what I have now.
Giving this a five star ratings for now, just because its not one of those poorly modified translated novels which totally killed the story.
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This is the best book that i have read on this platform. The grammar is near perfect, and even the "fodder" characters are not totally 2D.That really tells you something. The mc is very well written as well as overpowered which is something I like and the overall story is heading in a very good direction.