*sigh*Is that how you express a sigh of disappointment in written form? Because I am feeling quite dissapointed right now.So, to start off this quite long rant, by reading the title "Ball of nothingness
No harem, so pack your bags boys. Everyone else can stay, I guess...The world is certainly alive and all nice, the characters play nicely alone, and no one doesn't exist for the reason of convenience, except one girl. The world-building in this is extensive and although no army building has been seen yet, Chapter 30, I feel like if this done correctly, I'll keep reading this book. Btw not really OP MC since he gets yeeted out of existence before chapter 30. I hope we see Orks cuz green is da best and da strongest!
Honestly, the writing here is good. But it's not just good, it's unique. It's nice and relaxed, you flow with the reading like a river and it just feels great to get through the book with clarity and relaxation. That's how it should be! The reader isn't struggling to get through the words. For that I admire your writing.The books got some humor in there as well and that's hard to find in these sorts of places. Keep it up!
I can't help but admire how strikingly subpar this novel is. This novel shockingly unoriginal, there are other novels out there that do this but way better but honestly that goes for a lot of novels on this site. This novel feels however like an off brand version of one of those, like fake meat in a questionable restaurant. Everything about this is boring, shallow, unoriginal and soulless from the characters, cheat, power system, world building just about every aspect of this really.If this novel was a food, it'd be sand. The only thing this novel has going for it is that the translation quality is alright. 0.75/5.
Sad. An interesting ability, an interesting MC, but everything else feels bland. You won't feel implicated in the story. Author has wasted a good setting with this book.
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I'm confused. why animals and insects? I mean the MC should be able to transform into anyone. why is it limited to animals and insects it's a huge plot hole.
great premisse but the mc its too stupid omg he can't do nothing right its cringe ... i hate this mc soo much i hope he dies <3 love the world and premissse but the mc its just too retard for me
Hi! This is the author here~ So, I hope you are all enjoying the novel I am writing here, and please do give me a review (you can criticise) so that I know what I should improve upon! Thanks to those who have already given me a review!Anyways, I will try to keep a consistent update but with university studies, health and other matters, I might be delayed or put on hiatus during tests or exams (sorry (ಥ﹏ಥ)!).Lastly, please help me come up with character names! I'm not that creative and I can't seem to come up with good names that reflect upon the characters ( ﾟヮﾟ) You can comment them down in the 'chapter comments' section and I will read them all!If you liked the book, it would be great if you could support me! You can follow my:Instagram: Bunny_SLYouTube: Bunny SLThanks for reading!Bunny
Well instead of a review here's the lyrics to the Song Deja Vu, best known from initial D.See your body into the moonlightEven if I try to cancelAll the pictures into the mindThere's a flashing in my eyesDon't you see my commission, the nationHas gone running againCan't you see now, illusionsRight into your mindDeja Vu!I've just been in this place before(Higher on the street)And I know it's my time to goCalling you, and the search is a mystery(Standing on my feet)It's so hard when I try to be me, woahWhooooaaa!!Deja Vu!I've just been in this time before(Higher on the beat)And I know it's a place to goCalling you and the search is a mystery(Standing on my feet)It's so hard when I try to be meYeeeaaaaaah!!See the future into the presentSee my past leaves in the distanceTry to guess now what's going onAnd the band begins to playDon't you see my commission, the nationHas gone running againCan't you see now, illusionsRight into your mindDeja Vu!I've just been in this place before(Higher on the street)And I know it's my time to goCalling you, and the search is a mystery(Standing on my feet)It's so hard when I try to be me, woahWhooooaaa!!Deja Vu!I've just been in this time before(Higher on the beat)And I know it's a place to goCalling you and the search is a mystery(Standing on my feet)It's so hard when I try to be meYeeeaaaaaah!!See your body into the moonlightEven if I try to cancelAll the pictures into the mindThere's a flashing in my eyesDon't you see my commission, the nationHas gone running againCan't you see now, illusionsRight into your mindDeja Vu!I've just been in this place before(Higher on the street)And I know it's my time to goCalling you, and the search is a mystery(Standing on my feet)It's so hard when I try to be me, woahWhooooaaa!!Deja Vu!I've just been in this time before(Higher on the beat)And I know it's a place to goCalling you and the search is a mystery(Standing on my feet)It's so hard when I try to be meYeeeaaaaaah!!
This book is amazing, keep going!Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
Another masterpiece by one of my favorite authors,the only thing bad about this novel is that there are only 60 ch avalable.LOM + game elements=me waiting for more ch :(