This novel got me hooked with only the first three chapters, I can say this because the author knows what he's doing, read this novel and thank me because damnnn this is a gem ? Type shi ❤️❤️
Geat Ready....Epic Battle....2025...( Human Race)
Great backstory let's see!!! The power system too unique I think..I have read my own shares of novels especially those of system genre so since the backdrop looks cool hope for more dramatic and character involved story instead of cliche arrogant mc slapping everyone flaunting his hierarchy...do a good job..good luck
Interesting opening. However the sentence construction could be improved & there are errors in certain words used which confuses the reader. Still a good read & looking forward to the story development.
Shameless self review here.. if you're coming from my other novel expect Whispers Of The Lost to be significantly darker. This novel is the spiritual successor of Eternal Guise. I learned a lot while writing my previous novel and this is my attempt to put those lessons to use. The style is a lot different. For folks reading my work for the first time. Expect a lot of action mystery world building and a clever Mc. Give it a shot if you don't like the first chapter.. I'll be honest you probably won't like the series. To anyone else though I encourage you to give Caspian and Menthil City a chance. The world is based on Victorian England and the story takes place in Menthil a similiar place to London in the 1800s. If you enjoy lampooning i can almost guarantee you'll love this novel.
Family drama, transmigration, elemental powers, Zombie/Monster apocalypse, and a love story. Interesting mix.
as follow indian, i related this story, But I like adventure in astra more, as I more of a pervert. Anyway, this is free review, hope you successed.
Is it I hope it gives you motivation to write
let me just tell you this about me, i am not a reader, but I'm reading this and waiting for new chapters every day like my life depends on it.
Overall, it wants to be good and I applaud this for trying something different. It feels like someone watched the original Blade Runner and then added some Ghost in the Shell to it.The Good: I like a dark, gritty, science fiction setting such as this. This is not a child's novel, but it is still a familar power-building scifi novel. We have some excellent character descriptions in most cases and the world itself appears interesting.The Bad: The writing quality and word choices in some of the earlier chapters is awful. A simple grammar check would've gotten most of them. (For example: Using bombarded as a noun when it should've been bombardment in multiple cases.) It's trying to be dark and gritty at times and pulls this off well, but sometimes it is taken too far and just gets weird for me. This is purely subjective so I can't really bash it for that. The 18+ scene was... alright. It needs something more or maybe more build-up. Maybe I'm just getting old so it could work for others.The Neutral: Not much to say. The author appears to have experience setting up a good story, but the grammar just needs a bit of help. The story seemed to escalate very quickly up to chapter 9 so I am not sure if this will be a long story or not. Keep it up, though! I'm enjoying it!
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I don't normally go for domination one way or the other however I truly enjoy this novel the chapter length is great the characters are well made and as a story progresses more war about the world opens I truly enjoy this novel and look forward for more