More chapters please author I look forward to the story
This novel started off really well, even the world and character building is pretty good. After he went to the five element world the second time, this novel's down fall started. The amount fillers is insane, it put even MGA to shame. This is the first novel I have read where the MC is still stuck in the impoverished starting place even at chapter 600. MC faces no setbacks for his idiotic decisions. I think his life spirit should have died when it got kidnapped to sparrows village. Certain places the MC should be there and not in training like during the mercenary guild meeting all the powers. Author needs to improve his creativity. Currently this novel is mediocre at best and will frustrate you most of the time. Only time will tell if it gets back to its best.
truly an underrated novel ,it has quite good aspect in all sector its writing quality is good ,characters are likeable ,mc is quite dark but not an absolute edgelord ,it also has some humor albeit it is dark overall i will give it 4.9 , it will be 5 if update would have been daily.
My honest review after 300chapters. Author is trying to introduce a massive world.. Probably wants to make this novel 5000chapters. Explains everything all the time so let's say world background is about 3.5. Story development is slow cuz of that world background ..And the questions that happen all the time between MC and his master and ofc the short chapters. The fact that 300chapters and the novel hasn't even ended a single arc is very disappointing. 3starsCharacter design: MC is a peasant who gets an omnipotent ring that is making him stronger every day without him needing to do much just feel anger for example or feel smart or whatever? and if that's not enough he gets a demigod master that's explains everything all the time. In conclusion the peasant is like an immortal that descended but he has the mind of peasant who doesn't know what goes where. 2starsIn comparison to other novels I'll give it 4. The review is my general opinion.Enjoy.
Loving this I hope it continues at this pace I hope to hear Zogan speak and girl faster its so cool that I don't want to drop my phone for a second
spoiler mc is sometime flexing too much and sometimes too kind and generous for eg 6soul bones without his help they would never even have found out what it is he even let them observe his soul pet many secrets than he still has to give a technique flexing would be the first time military saved him and died and severely injured acts generous refusing some resources of student level to give professional soul masters oh yes it's more valuable than their lives doesn't even bother learning their name and at first it seemed like overwhelming knowledge to train soul pets bit they all just have awaken different already available bloodline and while it is about soul pets we doesn't see mc really train much except for when he first cultivated he doesn't even bother culivate sword after a few time by the way technique should be cultvated by two beings I think so how pet did it is beyond me and it just seems like he get resources easily all the while and people treat him nicely extraordinary luck when he refused they still insist on giving him things +
A unique story but the concept is clean and straight and I like books like that. Though there are very few chapters , the story so far is interesting gripping my attention! Hoping for more chapters soon!!!!!
Not a lot of logic here, translation is not to good too, but still not a 1 star review as most say.I can give it a 3.Not a lot of logic here, translation is not to good too, but still not a 1 star review as most say.I can give it a 3.
The princess's personality seems full of potential. The element of mystery is strong around the story setting. The most addictive thing is the prospects of dragon and pheonix interaction....can't wait to see how the things would be developing further.
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great story I just wish I knew if it is harem. he has met and interacted with a total of maybe 3 guys. I don't particularly care either way but it is odd because with this focus it almost seems really weird when you have 9 different girls all around with some having flirty and cheap characteristics. then all of a sudden he is drawn to one and just flat out mentions the others aren't important to him, which is fine but then why make them all the same temperament and introduce them the exact same way. I am terrible at names anyway so I can't remember what one she was much less what she's done and can do. I guess the biggest flaw i have found is that the characters grow but they all grow the same . I can hardly tell the difference from each character which either stems from inexperience from either me or the author or is used to establish a harem. honestly one of the few where I would specifically recommend harem due to the corner that you have written yourself into with the at least 5 separate women that are all stingy and half are flirty and the rest are just blunt. regardless keep up the good work hope you can find a good ground and escape the corner.
deleted last review cause of inappropriate words..... so here I go with some manners.great novel, intriguing premise of a drunken faced mc.all 45 chapters in. love the way you handled the mc origin story, detailed but not rushed or any info dump, it showed he's drive and what made him lin donghai and it transitioned well into his next worldgreat combo of brain and brawnswell guy, never a dull moment around the kid the underworld ride. doesn't stink of self righteousness.great read, and an advice for author 2 words