Writing style changes in the late 600’s. Not sure if they got a new editor or started using Chat GPT/LLM to edit like other authors. Either way it changed the writing style and it lost its identity. Really disappointing.
Edit: The writing style went back to normal at 683. I hope it stays that way.
Edit 2: The new writing style is back at 686. It sucks.
Edit 3: The writing style went back to normal at 693. I’ll keep everyone posted.
Edit 4: The new/bad writing style is back at 696.
Edit 5: The normal writing style is back at 699.
Good one. Is there a 2nd part or smthing... ????
Whahahaha finally a system is not being controlled but now its the human will be controlled all hail system novels all hail Britannia ?!!!
1: I can agree with you up to a certain point. Let's clarify a few things
First: There's no doubt that the main character is *h*rny, but claiming he jumps on every woman he meets is incorrect, although not entirely. Unlike other novels, there's no explicit description of s*x scenes. It's simply mentioned that it happened, and the story moves on (which I appreciate). So saying it ruined your reading experience doesn't make sense. I'd understand if you said it had many chapters dedicated solely to s*x, like other novels, but we know it barely has a few lines dedicated to it. Clearly, the author wanted to focus on the plot rather than the act itself.
Second: Stopping after the first 60 chapters doesn't provide much insight. Chapters are lengthy, and a lot happens within the initial 60, but is that enough for conclusions? Definitely not. I'm currently at chapter 358, and I can tell you the plot is still going strong. The writing is good, events aren't random,and there's a purpose behind-
Is this dropped?. It is one of the first Novel I read. It is a Gold in its own way. And a Unique story.
Soul of Negary
Trash of the counts family
When does he kill him ?
Yeah true
Good
Amazing so far... has so much view and research giving the reader of a realistic view on all these occurrences. Note it is a harder read with all of the detail in stock but it makes it Last so much longer and makes the mind wonder into the story itself. The fact the mc isn't a full blown power house and is growing with the story brings it closer to home than when they become so over powered that they can just kill anything that comes their way. On chapter 371
obrigada pela linda historia....