Diaoist12
The start was good, but as the story progress it became quite repetitive. The nationalism are specially strong in this one calling others country a thief but not knowing their country is also a thief.
I liked the story, even if its cliche. XD It was funny to read it as I am a math teacher. XD I wonder if they will continue it, I hope they will.
I honestly think this novel is great! I love the fact that the mc takes an active role in growing his family and not just himself. Keep the good work up and thanks!
Great story, but one thing bothers me a lot. That is, the main character's kokugan. Don't you think 20 x speed is a bit too much? I mean there is literally no genkai that can ever hope to match it if MC can just blitz everything when he gets strong enough. Please nerf it, or add some backlash. I mean MC just goes 30 times faster than his original speed and just drains his chakra. If MC is as fast as Naruto in Boruto, then he can easily one shot every opponent so far. Just feels extremely unrealistic for a bloodline to be this op. Not to mention, if someone had the bloodline before him, then how is it still unknown?
Well i read all 152 chapters which was enjoyable. I just hope that the girls that will be in his harem aren't all yanderes atleast let's have different kinds of personality.I recommend this novel to all those who likes OP MC and i don't know if it's a fanfic or not because there's many anime element but it's still good. The thing that i don't like is that the Jack of all Trades, it could be good with atleast 3 weapons mastery since it could still be fix since his fighting style changed from his previous life due to his skills, developments and potential plus it could be a waste if he didn't learn from that future sword master in their organization which is lye who likes to spar and i suggest him to learn assassination skill since i know he'll be facing many divine beings or atleast learn concealment to keep his tracks from troublesome things, you never know? Anyway i still like this storry. RECOMMENDED❤️
Ok qidian,get your game together. You literally copied 20+ chapters from another site and still failed to label them properly.... Your chapter 21 is actually chapter 158...its a good novel though
I love this book. It's captivating and quite interesting
Pls. Update again soon
This is a great book. so unique and appealing. Definitely recommendable. You did a great job here author. Please update more. I love you.
it's interesting
I really want to like this book, I do, the idea of the story is great but the errors are so horrendous. In it's current state not something I want to pay to continue reading. this book is in desperate need of an editor.
it's a lovely book.. ready for the next update
