Diaoist12
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one of the best books i have read!!!! ,if you can can you add a 18+ scene after the atteck on the angel as like a way for the mc to relax. (the 18+ scene betwen the mc and a man)
Excellent novel but I’m confused on the world background a bit. I thought it takes place on earth since names o kingdoms and peoples from earth are used and the Roman Empire is also used but there is also evidence to support that it is not on earth. If it is not on earth is there a map of the world to make reading easier and see the progress of the MC.
Amazing work I must give it to you? I like it very much it is great , can’t wait to read more of your work
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ce roman a un énorme potentiel ne laisser pas tomber cette fan fic svp ce serait dommage ++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
T is novel too good. Almost couldn't believe eyes of my mine. have been finding move with mystery, action a. d love love MC finally found one. thanks you for writing his!
Don't read this if you're obsessed with tiny details, the story is most enjoyable when viewed on the bigger picture. The MC is an absolute joy to read with his crazy yet somewhat unrealistic ideas, it's amazing seeing the repercussions and cause of his actions, despite knowing it'll be a short novel it's a joy to read in bursts!
The plot and characters are well developed.The storytelling is also very interesting,it captures your attention as soon as you start reading it.
dropped? come back and keep writing, a good novel cannot stop open..............................................................................................................................................
Here are my thoughts for this novel based on what I read so far:World Building: So far the world building is okay as the author give some situational description. However, the author can expand more about the demon world or even the world itself in the next chapter to make it more engaging to explore.Character: so far the character is fine I guess and the main character is okay as he have some kind of sarcastic personality. Therefore, there will be an interesting development in future chapters.Overall, it's quite decent road for the reincarnation and I do believe can expand more about the world and the character itself. Therefore, keep up the good work
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