ZEPHYR
Honestly, a terrible novel filled with inherent bias and terrible characters with no sense of fulfillment when reading. Contrasting statements in the novel as mc says he thinks of second life as game but when he reincarnates into the world he suddenly has immense amounts of nationalism for Dragon country aka china.
Sounds like a Simp Beta from the Reviews already so why bother ????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
elite plot, I'm excited for the future chaps ...............................................................................................................
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I wouldn't waste your time on this one. I am not going to go into each every thing that is wrong but the 'characters' are terrible and the plot is bad. The power is... not good. No thanks.
I only gave this one a try because I have loved every story the author has written so far. And this one is has me hooked too! Can't wait for more chapters. Good work, Fate!
After reading this for a while, I can now clearly see that the author gives the story's development some serious consideration.
As the desert did to this island, I predict that they will travel to another island that connects to it next.
I enjoy the characters. The main character is a good-natured idiot who can also be taken seriously, and I laughed when he turned into a girl. It would be strange if he continued to be a girl, so I just hope that won't be the case.
Other than that, I adore creating new worlds and discovering new secrets.
This might be the best of this batch and I hope it gets picked .....................................????????????????????
After over 400 chapters, the translation quality is still trash. Confuses the grades of items, even when you’r still reading the same paragraph. Multiple character names are changed around and miss spelled, either there is no editor or they just don’t care.
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Pretty good so far, no he didn’t just “forgive” his ex wife. After gaining power he found out they kicked him out and in such a way that he would hate them so that he would have nothing to do with them and their enemy wouldn’t try and harm him. he found out and decided to look after them anyway. He wasn’t cucked or anything.
I like it, but the slice-of-life nature + an Overpowered MC doesn’t make for interesting writing. If there were more comedy I could bear with it, but it’s not that funny.
