Es realmente bueno, al principio se me hizo un poco confuso por el hecho de que me gustaba la obra anterior por lo que ya iba más avanzado que este, espero que en un futuro este pueda brillar tanto como ese pero de momento va muy bien ??
I don't care. I'd rate whatever I want. I just love this book. thank you author . although I haven't finished this book .
just fix the grammar and you have a decent book. .
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I'm sorry I really tried I really really tried to read this but it's just so bad work on grammar a little get your story straight then I'll start reading again
Awesome story!!I don't normally give 5 stars because even in some fairly well written stories, my bloody persnickety brain notices the flaws, and throws me out of my immersion in the story. While this story isn't perfect, it's well enough written and so enjoyable that the odd small flaw doesn't break the immersion. It's a delight.The dialog is witty and that's because even the other characters, both in and out of the game, are believably vivid and interesting, let alone the MC.It uses a classic web novel trope, the respawn, without treating it like a trope. The MC is affected by his death, and past, unlike the typical, "Oh well, that happened. Let's have a good life this time!" reaction you see so often, as if years of life, conflict and death have no impact on the psyche. It also doesn't follow the standard "I will save the world" or "I must become powerful and/or rich" (in either world) plot this time around, despite the MC being weak in his first life. He was weak, but there isn't the bullying, abuse, betrayal by half-brother, fiancee, best friend, step-mother, classmates, etc.. you see in respawn stories.Too often in a VRMMORPG game novel, after a while, either the game or real life (typically real life) starts to feel either boring, just for word count, or skimping on anything interesting or meaningful. That is not happening in this story, and there are enough plot lines going on that it does not seem likely. As others have said, this is a well thought out story.Well done! I am totally looking forward to more chapters. I'm even going to read the Jim Daoran's other book, The Slime Farmer, even though I don't like slimes and typically ignore such books, because this author has given me reason to think that he can write an enjoyable story, even with slimes involved. (Don't hate on me about slimes, we all have our likes and dislikes. ;-)
I got a dig bick2. You that read wrong3. You read that wrong too4. You checked5. You smiled7. You are wondering why you're still this reading this8. You saw that mistake...right?(on 7)10. But did you see that I skipped 6?10. You checked11. And saw you that I doubled 10 and skipped 912. I said saw you, not you saw13. I also skipped 114. You got tricked15. I'm just wasting your time... NOW GO AND READ THE STORY!!!
The worldbuilding in these chapters is so immersive I forgot I was reading a book. The Flower Appreciation Banquet isn't just a backdrop — it's a fully realized social ecosystem where every detail tells you something about the hierarchy, the politics, the unspoken rules. Let me paint you the picture: you've got the Imperial Garden, young ladies from noble families composing poetry, a chess competition by Moon Shadow Lake, eunuchs counting submissions, portraits of candidates spread across a table like a market. But what makes it feel alive is the sensory detail. Shen Yunying eating jade dew cakes and thinking 'the ones from Yipin Zhai were more fragrant, softer, and sweeter' — that's not just flavor text, that's a character telling us exactly who she is through her preferences. She's someone who notices quality, who has standards, who finds pleasure in small things. And the setting itself mirrors the plot: the banquet is supposed to be about literary talent (poetry composition), but the girl who doesn't submit a poem gets chosen. The chess competition is supposed to showcase the Crown Prince's elegance, but it's really just distraction from the real event. The portraits on the table — 'meticulous effort akin to the selection process for imperial consorts' — this is a world where women are evaluated like livestock, and the Shen family's obsession with matching their daughters to the right husband is treated as normal. Even the carriage ride home tells you everything: Shen Yunying relaxed, Shen Yunman despondent, the swaying jolting them back to reality. And the ancestral hall scene where Shen Yunnian lights incense and bows before the decree — that moment of tradition, of connecting the living to the dead, of a grandfather accepting fate — it grounds the entire political maneuvering in something deeper. This isn't just a story about marriage; it's a story about a world where every action has ritual significance, where the past weighs on the present, and where a single imperial decree can reshape generations.
hello guys this is my second review ;)first of all this is my first novel. so don't be disappointed in first few chapters, its getting better and better, as a reader I can tell that too. and i want to tell some things before you guys start reading. 1, MC Du Chan is an dropped out, gangster, and a otaku in his past life on earth, he is a bit childish in the starting chapters because he is in kids body! a 8 years old kid is not an adult! even with his past memories! but everything will change after some chapters. but he is selfish, and evil type MC, you can call it Anti Hero!2, Storyits strong plot and good i guess 3, HaremYes, its harem! but there are no dumb FL's, MC loves his harem more then anything! but he had no weakness to women! he would kill women too! 4, Grammarmy grammar is kinda not bad, you will understand whats happening and whats going on, but it will cause problem to some readers. 5, Updates yes, daily updates! thats enough i think, Thanks for reading this review! please try to read this novel too, Thanks in advance! ;) This novel is not bad!
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so far have only read the discription but I can feel this is gonna be good since from what I can tell there's gonna be a lot of "reject humanity return to monke" memes And this books gonna be a giant bucket of laughs (will update review when I read the book right now I'm reading some other books so this is going in my "read later" folder)
I’m caught up with the Translations. So far so good but there are a few holes, that it’s quite worrying. We don’t know if they’re inconsistencies yet since the Translations haven’t reached that point yet. So far good quality writing and perhaps even the best Dad-Novel ever.It’s still to soon to judge as not enough chapters. But I feel very optimistic. You can never tell with CNs. This can become polygamy from a flick of switch or get ruined by some BS.