[Grammar] is near flawless 10/10=(I understand the language, and can read it perfectly. )[Stability] is good 10/10= (i can bear the wait without being driven MAD.)[Story Development] has me hooked 10/10= (Not too slow, not too fast.)[Character Design] is 10/10=( I CAN TELL WHAT PEOPLE LOOK LIKE! YASS!!!)[World Background] is 9/10= (It's good, and I like it very much BUT, I would like a little more info on what is going on in the world.)In other words; you get a big shiny gold star~
There is no cure for regret - Chinese wisdom.The author skillfully managed to describe the image of the geek, his thoughts, his clothes and sore skin, hair, as a result of not a healthy lifestyle!As if a sensible person, a workaholic, seems to fall for a simple bait, without even checking the site, without checking the company, it is not known where to go ...After the story begins to understand the manga GANZ ... there was a ball ... alien creatures ... a kind of thrash version of the groundhog day ...With closed status and open ... something like the function of the android and google helper)))The moment is well described when the main character begins to understand that his mind begins to fail ...The novel turned out to be more exciting than I expected.The first reading gave a different vision. And when I re-read the first 3 chapters, the story seemed to me more fascinating and it was not thought of Ganz as it seemed after reading the first time.Love reaction ... charlatan !!!! Ahahahahahahaha !!! There is humor, that's great!Here is the beauty of small chapters, read easily!It's like modern Japanese dramas, they used to be 45-30 minutes earlier, and now exactly 12 minutes, so as not to waste time - for sleep and rest. New formats, you need to be able to use them !!!))))Without motivation ... there is no growth ... so gymnastics ... gives growth ???? Interestingly, this is chapter 8!Yes, Wallmart is not a store for 100 yen ... where the choice is greater.Oh, it's like a warcraft game with save mode)))I wonder why he didn't buy a shotgun? And took a machete ???Oooh, Jack was an esthete, he read the Russian classics? !!!!Interestingly, he knew French? The last pages of 25 Leo Tolstoy's "War and Peace" were in French. some bibliophiles say that in these last pages there is some sort of quintessence of the whole novel.I don’t know French ... or maybe they’re stories of book geeks ... who knows, but this is offtopic.War and peace, much more interesting than the work of Dostoevsky or Chekhov ... but from Mayakovsky, Jack would get a boost of energy ... but he was a capitalist and did not read the poets of the world proletariat ...))))Although here are the works of Vladimir Orlov "Altist Danilov" he would be very interesting. But that time is long gone ...It would be better to read the books on sleep management, Carlos Castaneda and the study of Zen practices, or maybe read the books about the "Big Game" ... the choice is really big ...The author ... well done ... exciting writing.I will continue the review probably tomorrow, intriguing. Interesting funny. All 5 out of 5 stars!Thanks to the author!5 stars, for humor !!!!
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I have said this a lot but will say this again, I love the plot, and I cant wait to see how the story plays out. < 3
It was a quite nice surprise stumbling across this, not easy to find interesting stories here on Webnovel, let alone one written well enough to enjoy reading.While the writtin g here is not the best, it is still far ahead of most stories on Webnovel, with most issues being minor at best.The story so far has been unfolding at a rather slow pace, but this time is used decently enough on introducing the so far ginormous seeming cast, giving every named character at least some quirk to identify them by.
Deteriorated from ch 247 onwards.Ruined the romance aspect of the novel.Too much match details, one match can take 10 chapters. It reads more like a football journal (play-by-play) analysis.
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I started reading this with pretty low expectations, having read comments about the character being childlike, and the story consisting of endless faceslapping. To my surprise, I am at chapter 97, and keep reading, because the story has kept me amused and fascinated. It might have all the clichés, but it’s addictive, and somehow, refreshing. Also, it has less creepy/sickening attitudes towards women/girls than many highly rated stories I’ve read, so far, so I’d recommend it to female readers (as of ch 97, that is, and there is one point of ickiness that keeps being brought up, but still. Beggars can’t be choosers.).
recommended: read it... you will love it! ;-) (if you like strong and a lillte............…. bit lucky MC haha)
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So far this book is a good read but please check your chapter placement you went form a boss fight to repet chapters. This make the store fall flat on it head.
This book is a masterpiece, why on earth this was dropped instead of being picked up is a heaven defying mystery. Although I'm currently only reading it on a semi-decent translating website (still lots of mistakes) it still manages to keep me interested and they're a few funny moments in it, just like versatile mage (one of my all time favourites and by the same author).