Good novel with a good background, And clearly explained in detail which won't give headache to readers. But it would be better if it is updated frequently.
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Since it has potential and you asked for a feedback, I'll leave a good rating. This might change in the future depending on what happens in the story later
For an average novel, I give an average rating. This book is your typical cliché overpowered cheat novel. MC has the power to attract overpowered pets and shock everyone. Dumb arrogant character appears in less than 10 chapters, he attempts to 'kill' the main character because main character insulted him. Hence main character attempts to kill him as revenge but ignorant police attacks main character because he has the power to control beast, "He must be a traitor to humans". Then proceeds to attack and get demolished by main character, "Impossible, how could a human achieve this level of power". Stronger guy shows up and resolves misunderstanding, "That cannon fodder attacked our beloved MC first! Ignorant police, you're fired from your job! You are a god-level talent, you need to join our (insert prestigious academy). I will give you money for you to join it". First up, we have no idea how this system work at all, no numbers or anything. Upgrades are thrown here and there and I doubt they are even keeping track of the number of points MC has. To nerf the main character so that the story can be extended, naturally we have to suppress the main character's cheat and instead opt for a god-level potential pet. Naturally since this is a cliché overpowered cheat novel, we need to have absolutely no world building. We'll just throw out the details as the plot progresses. Naturally, I came here having no expectations of this novel. To me, this novel is just some junk food to eat while looking for actually good novels to read. So in summary, your typical cliché novel that can be found everywhere on this website. Good luck finding an actual good read.
One of the best novels I've read on wn, and extremely addcting to the point where I always check it the moment I open wn. Everytime I see that it's updated, I literally go over the moon.
Writing Quality - Though there are a few grammatical errors, the writing style and words are nothing short of exceptional. Every thing is described nicely and easy to understand. Plus, grammar doesn't matter much these days so you get 5 stars.
Stability of Updates - Love that it's updating everyday, but sadly I read too fast to be satisfied. I respect your effort for keeping up everyday! 5 stars!
Story Development - A bit cliched but also has originality. Incredibly enjoyable to read, plus I like the small twists every now and then. It also makes me want to know what happens next, getting me more addcted. 5 stars again!
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World Background - When I first read this, it left me speechless. Putting both fantasy hierarchy and the space setting is an incredible idea, plus there's also an backstory of how it came to be like that and that makes it all the more interesting to read. And it's so incredibly well written that it actually makes me think that such a setting could be real and out there somewhere in the universe.
Overall Score - P E R F E C T I O N
I would 100% recommend this to anyone I meet.
Need more chapterrrrrs!!!
(I think I'm going to need treatment for my addiction now)
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A well written story, but it does seem to be missing a hook of some kind. There not much that differentiates it from all the other born in a fantasy world with a system. It looks like there is hints that the romance will be non-traditional which might add something as the story develops.
Fascinating, Engaging, Immersing???Really loved it. The description, actions, emotions and thoughts of the characters, all of it was captivating. Good job author! Keep it up. Waiting for more chapters???
Excellent Piece, I got to know of it from a friend and out of reluctancy I got to try out and here i am reviewing the first best webnovel I've ever read. i wish the inks don't stop flowing, the MC is quite cute as well.
Absolutely loving it so far (90+ chapters). The writing is grammatically great. The MC’s strength increases at a nice pace. I just wish we could see his stats panel a little more to see how much he grows after each major battle. Highly recommend.
Simply stated, this an average novel among Webnovel standards. 2-D characters that aren’t fleshed out, so they feel like the generic MC’s and secondary characters all over this website.
The plot in this story started fairly simple and easy to grasp, a reincarnated second chance to reach the top and beyond. What started as a VR story became a mixture of Gods and the supernatural, which could’ve been great if it wasn’t for one thing... VR.
Just like Shura’s Wrath, an older novel that tried to merge the VR world and real world. Like it’s predecessor, this one failed so far.
Not to insult the authors ability but every character you’ve read about in any other VR novel, is literally the same except the change in names and locations. To the MC’s love interest whose beauty is ‘absurdly-breathtaking-she-hides-her-beauty. Even the MC and Gods can’t resist.’ The MC himself is no different, following the ‘cold-hearted and emotional’ trope.
This novel could have better potential but the author tries to make things edgy and emo, making the novel a cringe-read. I assume because the author is probably a first-timer and a teenager (which turns out to be false, since they’re a law student.)
Instead of using VR, the author should’ve opted to based the story in the real word with fantasy elements or- in the future where VR was so transcendent, it literally was a second life rather than just a ‘game’. This would’ve meshed the story better in my humble opinion. Instead we have immersion breaking elements such as status bars and other rpg-elements that’s redundant throughout chapters. Which will only further destroy the immersion for the reader since the author introduced the concept of different ‘universes’ based on a theme (wuxia, steampunk, western...).
The novel is decent for a speed-read or when bored. If the author would further refine and better mix the world of reality and VR, this story could leap. Unfortunately the combo of stale characters and storytelling sells it short.