this is The Legendary Mechanic
one was the best on this platform!!! if you haven't read it yet, I highly recommend it.
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One word. Gold. Funny and crazy mc. A must read from me. Don't waste time reading through the rest of this review and give read! I promise you won't regret it!Great job, author!
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All of the characters are very one dimensional. All of the girls fall for the MC a little too easily. The overall concept is interesting and the pacing and plot are pretty good.
Past 50-60 chapters (~ch 70 to ~130) showed an issue: The author doesn't know how to make story arcs actually develop.
Things happen, but nothing seems to have progressed. MC is in the same spot, except some inconsequential events happened (i.e. you could skip them, and the story would still be fine).
Oh yeah, this author seems to have taken away the MC's ability to think for himself. Asking the guy in his ring about knowledge he doesn't know is one thing, having the MC ask the guy about decisions he should be making himself is another.
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Not gonna read this for now, but, I feel like the Omni in mastery is unnecessary. Since Omni is a very strong and serious word. Omnipotence, omnifarious, omniscient etc etc. Someone with Omni-Mastery would essentially master anything and everything instantly. If you see someone swinging a sword at you, you would know exactly how to deflect, avoid or parry the strike. Why? Cuz you've just instantly mastered swordsmanship and control of your own body & mind.
Just, don't mess with the word Omni unless you mean it in every sense of the word, since that's exactly what it means.
leaving 5 stars because so far your books keep me going. Thank you for working so hard to provide reading material during these times. Gives me something to look forward to everyday
Hi readers I just want to say thank you for keeping support. I just posted this story yesterday and now it has 1.93k views I realy did'nt expect this, thank you so much I dont know what I feel. I am so happy and sooo surprise when I saw the views of my story. And dont worry I will upload the whole chapters of Once Upon A Mistake and soon there will be a prequel of this story after of this story I will post the prequel on webnovel so stay tunned readers.
And I love you all so much!
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Good story, tho there are mistakes here and there.
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