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Hey Author why did you stop the novel,it's great novel so why don't you just carry on this novel again otherwise it's really a pity afterall it's really a best novel
Quite boring, the MC encounters deadly situations almost all the time, it's too much to the point of becoming very boring, the only slightly eye catching thing is the novelty of the mc's ability and the fact that he can become a monster, other than that, the main plot, the characters, the world background, and so on are just mediocre. I'm also disatisfied with mc's personality, sometimes he's quite slow to adapt, he was amazed at simple and predictable things. I also have a feeling that things will be quite repititive. Personally, it's not really worth reading. But maybe it's personal taste and other people like it.
Keep up the good work m8☺?☺?☺?☺?☺?☺?☺?☺?☺?☺?☺?☺?☺?☺?☺?☺?☺?☺?☺?☺?☺?☺?☺?☺?☺?☺?☺?☺?☺?☺?☺?☺?☺?☺?☺?☺?☺?☺?☺?☺?☺?☺?☺?☺?☺?☺?☺?☺?☺?☺?☺?☺?☺?☺?
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Honestly I liked the first few chapters. After that its just keeps going down until chapter 18 when it became unreadable. After that I was just skipping You can see the author just wanted to get to thet point fast and he didn’t care about how it got there. The first two time skips were mean less and that’s 5 years. Even if he wanted to be low-key since the whole city know he could talk and walk and train when he was 1 year old it was useless. His father already know he was special since birth but didn’t do anything. And that’s just the tip of the iceberg. And that’s just the story development. Mind the shallow mc ,the useless guards and the sloppy power system in the world. Everything about it was just really sloppy and disappointing
this is a slow paced novel, so if you have limited atention span it's better to get away.For the story itself it's a combination of i really am a superstar and losing money to be a tycoon(you can find both here). by itself it's not considered original or unique since plenty other have similar premise. but the author have succeed in making this book an interesting read, i hope this book get selected.
It's a really great story that elevates the genre of a system in real-life and the VR game to a higher level. The only bad thing about the story is that the MC doesn't have any supporting cast yet, so it's a bit boring to read the MC's thoughts and actions, there needs to be a little romance or comradery with others. But the story is still new so it might come up in future chapters.
The translation on this novel is horrible, characters switched between male and female constantly, incoherent sentences, it was just bad. If you read English above a 2nd grade lvl good luck...
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