The story is good but some things are getting annoying.The mc sometimes forget information he already knows, especially about the composition of this world ( different continents with different power bases ).I am at chapter 125 and he was suprised at least 4 time about the same information. That there is a magic continent. Even after the dragon confirmed his suspicion. He still got suprised by the dungeons information and also after hearing magic continent from tian tian after becoming a dungeon town owner. The main char is stupid and i sometimes think that the author himself forgets information he already revealed to the MC.As an author, he should be able to follow his own story but i am happy that he never mixed names so fat
looking forward to reading it the synopsis seems good
Here is some honest review of mine. The event was too direct and happens so quickly. The gaps and lines were way too much messy. I don't know what to say about this but I think it's natural for the gamer story liked this. Don't use much descriptions and long paragraphs that filled that pages completely. It could lead some readers into confusion. And try to use capital letter to every character when it's placed on the first part of the word. For example, "hm" instead "Hm, she's not that bad." And also, the plot was interesting which made this story to have a potential. No hard feelings, I love the story flow so far and it was good. You can keep up the good work! :3
Shameless author here. Of course, I will give myself a positive review. If I didn't like what I write, why would I keep writing? I hope to be making fewer grammatical mistakes but if there are still any, just comment and I'll fix it. ?✍️♥️?
same as summoning japan but hell yeah murica here we go........................................................................................................................................
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Hmmmmmmmm...... Too early to write much, but seems am gonna enjoy this... Lovely synopsis, wonderful Story, plots and twist In place!!!!!!!
Hehehe this is a great read aye! :DLove the writing style, it's casual and event-packed, which I absolutely love hehe! <3The premise of this story is interesting, complete with a likable MC, too! Me likeyyy <3Great work, author! :D
Unfortunatly, the author tend to spend half of each chapter having the Voidwalkers making a bunch of reference to popular games and anime, and most of the rest describing the female characters in great details (especially their legs).I'm afraid this got boring fairly quickly.
I really enjoyed this novel, however, I wish it would update more frequently. It was been, I believe, over a month and it still has not come out with chapter 11. I hope that this story turns out better than it is now, but I can't wish for it to be better as it is already awesome. Good luck to you, Author-san!
If this doesn't deserve a review, what does? Rhetorical question please do not stoop down and correct a potato. Let the potato speak his words freely. The potato needs chapters as evolution material as he is a high ranking potato. He is actually the #0 ranker, check it. I'm just rambling for 140 characters.
Please chapters free pleasseeeeeee ?????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????