i mwan its good if you want something and its a good effort by the writer since its his first novel
The story crafts a vivid and immersive fantasy world, showing great promise despite some unpolished areas. For a newcomer, it's an impressive effort, especially in how the author clarifies early confusion, making the narrative more engaging. This attention to clarity strengthens the storytelling, keeping the reader invested in both the plot and characters. With further refinement, the author’s style could become truly exceptional.
I'll be honest, the books is nice and engaging but it's not relatable for me sha. Aside from that it's a good read
I enjoy reading this book. This is so interesting.
The story is very very hooking and I can say that this would be a hit if contracted. The author has good control of language and has good narration and pacing. I also loved the MC and her actions. Wanting to know more in the future. Good luck ?
wow the beginning looks interesting, just chapter 1 make me want to discover moore
The mayor issue is the translation. Since the beginning there is mixed ups with gender and pronouns. ?
That was a nice story, I like how he had a normal life but was forced to walk down a darker path, definitely continuing to read it. I like how Shen Yuan struggles with his emotions, like us.
Overall, it's intriguing but it seems very unnatural, very ai written which is totally fine if you're just formulating the plot but maybe use every words mmmCool characters, cool pacing very solid ?
Quick Announcement starting at chapter 145. The author told me at discord not to change the names of the MC or everyone anymore.So starting at chapter 145. All of it will be Chinese names now.
Quick Announcement starting at chapter 145. The author told me at discord not to change the names of the MC or everyone anymore.So starting at chapter 145. All of it will be Chinese names now.
so basically the stories really good and quite interesting however when you get around 43? It all turns to sht tbh. The whole reason I read and wanted to read the story was because he is a monster/serpent dragon. However not only do you turn him human but then he gets a necromancer job ???? Like what tf is the point just get him to be reborn as a human with a dragon bloodline if you wanted that and not waste my time.. Swear it happens with all stories like this. They all start out really well then suddenly they always have to be turned into humans like I read and wanted to read the story because he wasnt. It wasnt the same old plot. Really disappointed. Good read up to 43 but then stop. Story loses its essence, its core... if you want a long story then dont recommend.