~I put both good and bad in the reviw so scroll down to see both~
Good things~
Okay so ive only reas about 40 chapters so far so take with a grain of salt buti thunk the author has a really good idea and good direction she went with the story as a whole and the development while fast makes sense for the Mc. there are also hardly any gramatical errors and that makes reading this story that much smoother. another thing i loved about the story is the evolution part as EoC was one of my favorite books and i thought it had a great system.
Bad things~
Ive only read about 40 chaps in the story but i wanted to say something. In the story you dont explain all of the skills and what they do like the skills she got from the phonix or some of those from the harpys and i just think its bad world building. i can accept that but the kingdom thing when she got back is just terrible i mean they the people there evolved from not even having anything above stone tools to staight up having lamps and a city in like 10 days. Then there is the whole population issue as the coty should only have around 50-100 people when the non combatants were evacuated before the fight but in just like 3 days since that happened there was unprecedented development. it just dosent make sense in my opinion. another criticism i have is that the pacing is just so incredibly break neck that it makes it hard to follow as it took the mc like 20 days to go from being a chicken to killing a phonix and having a kingdom.
Man, I had to drop this story.it wasn’t bad until like chapter 10-11 when the MC decides to drop all her secrets and then precedes to say she doesn’t want to tell them everything after she already did. Stoped after chapter 13 where I couldn’t handle it anymore. If it gets better afterwards great couldn’t get there though. Till then it was great, good plot, pretty good MC, and what seemed to be a good plot intro, but dumb MC accident ruined it.
I am an avid kingdom building novel fan and when I started to read this novel, I was blown away by the amazing world-building and story development. What sets it apart is the diverse perspectives of side characters—they're not just cardboard cutouts. Sure, it starts slow, but by after the first history event, things get faster.
Fantastic fan fic of tales of demons and gods with a refreshingly smart main protagonist (after you get past the first chapter anyway). Has become my new favorite fanfic that kept me reading late into the night. Just read the first few chapters and I am sure you will fall in love with this novel ;)
I have a question. Does the MC get stronger or upgrades his power later in the novel?
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Great book, hope the author picks it up again and continues it, also is there a discord or patreon where we can support the book or author. Would love to see the story continue and see the sports festival and see kei meet class 1A
Hello, my fellow Taoist. It's me, the author. ( sound stupid, but the humor was acceptable.) Some asked about genre development, but I'm a newbie, and please accept some mistakes. As the stories still needed to be improved, I'm gladly open to suggestions. Thanks for passing by.
The first chapter introduces the main character and her love interest, and there is some foreshadowing. The plot is interesting. The idea and setting of the novel is great.
I really love the story, I thought the story is full of sad emotions but its funny. This story is very interesting! Yvienna is a unique name and she's a savage, I really like this female lead. You will not regret to read this novel, this novel is like reality because not every girl are good. You should try to read this novel and I really like the girl being savage. I also like Kyle because he's a campus crush and he is the owner of the University. They're charisma is very fantastic. I'm still waiting for the next update, I'm so excited what will Yvienna do to Kyle.
Review (Chapter 80)The novel started off great in the beginning, i was absolutely wow’ed by the introductory chapters. But then it starts to fall off, pretty much levels dont matter to the mc, from the first fight to the boss fight. after a little while its explained how his attributes are higher than normal for his level and his 120 rating further increases the effects? But lets talk about the spider, an arrow blows off half the bosses face ‘ok a consumable whatever’ he uses a spear and controls it to spin inside the boss monster’s body getting “super critical hits” Okay he wins bc he used environment but then how about the Mythic boss which he shouldve died just being near the fight and he causes the boss to be weary of what a lvl 15 when the boss and players are so high he cant even see their levels. he uses his ultra big brain from being there a little bit to figure out the lightning patterns that the guilds who studied to fight the boss didnt even notice and uses the environment to electrocute the boss and his sword to cut and kill this super high ranked mythic boss and proceed to demolish and intimidate the high ranking players and then escape? Cant continue reading because game mechanics dont apply here and the stat page is meaningless. I enjoy the background building but inside the game i just cant anymore.
I really like that the expectations for this story and the rules and societal norms for this world are explained in detail right from the start so there is no need to be shocked or question why characters behave the way they do. So far I love it and I can’t wait to see if the plot develops the way I expect it to. I don’t know what is meant by world background so I just gave that 5 stars too. ❤️