Its a hot story
great story. keep up the good works.??
it's good ...
very intriguing book. would recommend this to my friends for sure
Good book!
This was a great book! Enjoyed every second of it. Loved the storyline and the extra extended family involvement. The book was written well and I will be looking for more from this author. Awesome job!
I love the slow solid love that builds between Star and Maximus and how their strengths and weaknesses are both displayed. They make each other so much better
im loving Lauren though he has an odd way of showing his love but still hes cool for Mandy
The story is very interesting, I am waiting for the sequel
Thank you, dear. It really means a lot to me.
I've read the manga, and while it wasn't exceptional, I soldiered on. However, the novel is an entirely different story - it's truly disappointing. The author clearly lacks skills, evident from the start with the main character effortlessly defeating level 500 foes with god-like magic. As the plot unfolds, it becomes apparent that even level 30 threats pose a significant danger, but our protagonist renders everything null and void due to his overwhelming power.
In Arifureta, such an imbalance was somewhat justified by the divine nature of the antagonist and opposing forces. But here, it feels forced, with no real challenge for our主角. What was once a comedic take in Arifureta has transformed into a serious narrative.
The character development is also a letdown. Despite knowing the scale of the world's power dynamics, the MC constantly devalues his own strength and believes his classmates are a threat. This inconsistency persists despite overwhelming evidence to the contrary.
The plot tries to salvage itself initially but crumbles when the MC decides to seek revenge swiftly, effortlessly toppling the villainous royalty. His erratic behavior and illogical decision-making follow, with instances of sudden shifts between rationality and poor choices, like recruiting a deranged princess.
Two specific events pushed me away from the story. One involved the MC's future vision, which felt clichéd and unconvincing. If he had seen the same vision, it would have been redundant, and the concept of future sight was mishandled. The other issue was the excessive use of gender pronouns within the MC's thoughts, which was unnecessary and detracted from the story's impact.
Overall, the novel fails to deliver a compelling narrative or believable characters, marred by poor writing and clichéd tropes.
Does this contain ntr?