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Please continue writing this story it's a great one
It has a great story with many plot twists and is not your typical harem style novel
What's interesting in this story is the protagonist's life. Indeed, he used to be the top magician, but his life was incredibly desolate. Upon being reborn, even though he starts without any power, he's in a warm family that supports and loves him, even though he's considered useless. This is another reason why I find myself rooting for the protagonist and wanting to read more about his family scenes.
This is a great novel so far I’m slowly getting more and more addicted to it.
The start is totally confusing. I know that he m did not reincarnate or something but why is that that his knowledge is MORE THAN the rank player claudia. Rank player are experienced player but why is it that he is more than experience than the rank player? also in the summary it is only said that the game only release a bit of information but from the protagonist decision from the start is like know it all and it is like he comes back from the past. I don't know if I understand it right but this is my opinion I will reread again ?.
very accurate. not sure if he talks about the 140 character requirement but that's pretty wack too. now I have to get this review up to 140.
If your new to web novels you will probably like this novel. those of you like me who have read dozens this novel probably isn't for you. The best way I would describe it is everything seems really shallow at best. it has no depth to it and the writing is subpar compared to most decent novels. Every sentence has to much or to little. With the writer adding completely pointless info into almost everything. just one example being "mask of mischief what a peculiar name, Long chen thought in his mind as he went threw this knowledge." is there a need to add in his mind. can't be "mask of mischief what a peculiar name, Long chen thought as he sorted out the information he received." idk maybe the writer thinks most people are to stupid to figure out that thought takes place in the mind and we cant make that connection without reading it. that's just a small example. Wouldn't be a big deal except you find things like that in almost every sentence and paragraph. Every time he thinks to himself his names long chen but anytime he talks to someone or vise versa it's long tian. another problem instead of using pronouns like he, him, his they use long chen almost every single time. long chen got up in the morning as long chen looked in the mirror. long chen thinking to himself yada yada yada like that. its unbelievably frustrating. Pick a name and stop using it so much it seems like the author believes every time they do there saving a childs life.
I had a wonderful time reading this. It's beautiful, complex and genuinely heartwarming. I felt pity for the MC which shows that the character writing was evidently impressive. The concept is captivating and the way the author has written the plot is truly commendable, as I didn't feel confused at any point. Above all, the description of a future era gives the novel the precise tint of sci fi that makes the book enjoyable. I could go on and on, but I don't wanna seem exaggerated so, I just wanna say that this is actually "really good". Overall, wonderful work, Author!Summed up in two words (cuz one isn't enough): TRULY SOUL-STIRRING
I wish the author would pick up this novel. It's great!
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I ONLY READ WHAT THE BOOK IS ABOUT AND ITS STUPID!! Y WOULD ANYONE READ A BOOK ABOUT SOMEONE ONLY SUMMING A SCARECROW??? ITS ONE OF TUE STUPIDEST TH9S 8 HEARD OF!!!!