This story is good because it does not rush itself and always tries to bring out the best in it also the author is willing to learn from his mistakes and to improve
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author I love how u started to set up the characters and world and your take on this genre but you update this book way too little,and I realy think if u put the time into this book it could be a banger.so while u do have your first readers interested why dont u try(and i know writing is hard af) to update the book a little more pls???
Pretty cool story. I had to read the first 2 chapters to grasp the story. But it was a worth while read. A lot of action and killing. By the end of the first volume, Vanessa goes from new girl to a baddie.
Let me say this it could have been better is the mc is gay just say. look at how the story started and him getting the memories made him for in love with is brother now that could have been interesting
I gave it 5 ratings earlier but I changed my mind. The story is greatly marred by unnecessary cringey romance, which could've been kept for 2 chapters max. The budding rivalry between the siblings was making this novel interesting but the author wants to cater to Wattpad and AO3 sort of readers. The FL is not even well written tbh. If it was the guy instead of the girl who kept chasing despite getting rejected many times, the readers would be calling him a creep. The author has tried to make her a pure hearted Goddess but she's just an annoying side character who exists to drag the story. I think I'll drop this. The romance is just too cringey. I wish it didn't have Wattpad elements.
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Time to guess all the possible real names of the members.Handsome Guy With Lightning Bolt should be Zeus. Dominator of the Sea is of course Poseidon, he is the most famous.Grandpa With Magical Power is Odin, due to being portrayed as quite old and knows about Ragnorok, an event only in Norse mythology.A Fireball In My Hand... should be Prometheus, as he "gave" the fireball to humanity, which was the creation of fire.Most Beautiful Goddess should be Aphrodite, in mythology considered the most beautiful greek goddess. Her comparison is between her Roman name ( Venus ) with Athena, one of the other few relevant goddesses.Golden apple should be based on the legend of the golden apple, of which it eliminates most gods, leaving only Athena, Hera, and Aphrodite. Due to Athena's divinity being war and wisdom, the only one left should be Hera. Edit : Golden Apple and Most Beautiful Goddess, Hera and Aphrodite can be intermatched.
This is the first review I have written so just ignore it if it's awkward.The starting chapter are a bit slow paced but important as they set up the world and the characters in it,the story is smooth and planned.The story is still developing but has potential to be in the top 5.recommend it as it is different from the regular vr novels.
Love it even though writing quality got a bit of problem but I still can understand what the author means it is ok if u think it is really bad then try (Journey To Become A True God) now that is bad english
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The grammar is simply too bad !!! And some of the readers even pointed out some mistakes too but the author just ignored them after leaving a like ! tf ?