Great so far - keep it up! Loved the plot and character build! Can’t wait to see what happens in the next chapters!! Thank you for sharing!!!
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I hadn’t even realised how far into the book I’d reached until I paused to check the time. Its definietly a great story, I’m going to read till the end. All I have to say is that there’s a lot of information condensed into one chapter. It can be a little overwhelming as a reader, but apart from that I really am enjoying it. Great job ?
190 + chapters and an amazingly committed author. A well-written story so far. 10 Chapter in and I'm invested. I think the story is well planned and I like how it progresses. The earlier chapter's pacing is not bad but I do like a faster pace overall I enjoy it.
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Go! Go! Loner and i are childhood friends. It hasn't left me still. So i love loner mc novels. Just my taste and I'll test it. Give it a try if you are a loner too!
We just need a good update schedule, everything in this novel is worth the wait. Good character build up, it's pretty hooky if you're new to the genre. Definitely a big thumbs up, but still we need constant update. Hope that author will have the time to do so. Overall good novel definitely worth it
For your first work, it was entertaining but it jumped through arcs like crazy. Even so, I really enjoyed it while it last, i hope you improve and keep writing so i can enjoy more of your books.
Well the storyline is pretty fleshed out besides the world setting and backstory on certain scales like sect scaling, where the town is located in what world and such stuff like that but the city is fleshed out nicely enough now if something goes and gets randomly injected. Also by fleshed out standards the 9 provinces are extremely lacking and they’re even given the feeling of being within a jolly horse ride away from the town. Now hopefully it gets somewhat fleshed out throughout the story in the contextually, (now I go on a tangent directed towards the author) now I don’t mean add in extreme detail just avoid making the areas sound like their so close to each other, you should atleast put some distance marks on how far the guy goes to find his people (or anything like that where it is confusing context wise)he is just in the mortal realm after all. Now terribly sorry about the review being so long and I wrote this later then In my night then I should’ve but I at least edited it somewhat. can hardly wait for the other twenty chapters.
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This ln has a very calm and soothing vibe which is reflected in the anime too. I myself am in love with a person,to whom I can't confess.So it's very relatable for me I mean the earlier monologues before they confessed.
The MC basically has the Power from the Mc of the Netflix show/series "Preacher" but on a wider scale.Right now we still have a bit naive MC which doesnt really know the limit of his Power, which the Author calls "Soul Power".But over the first 10 chapter the MC try to get to know the limits off his powers and the accuracy or what he needs to say accuratly for the effect he wishs for.I dont have anything in particular to nag about because the gramma is good and so is the spacing of the sentences (not one giant blob of text).And since its really earky for a review i cant really say if the MC smartens up and gets like a Leylin Farlir ( hope i didnt butcher this name/wmw ) or if he will get a "Katekjo hitman reborn" annoying mc.We will see what the future bring but right now this is an absolute and resoundig."Go read and give the novel a try"