Overall a good novel but it has the standard translation errors and some other annoyances that shouldn’t exist like butchered sentences some statements that don’t have anything to do with what was happening
So far I've thoroughly enjoyed his story. The Main Character is smart and know when to use things to his advantage well. There isn't a giant information dump that most other stories have that can bore the reader right away. The plot and writing are both very good. The world has a great background and it feels real and living. Awesome job Author. This story has me hooked.
A very well made story with strong basis that look like a superhero back story.The story doesn't stop on one part for 10 million years snd gets right to the point.Good story :]
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First of all do the author want to continue updating this novel or not. What I want was a constant updates of at least 5 - 7 chapters/week, cause lately there aren't any update on this novel. This kind of situation really piss me off.
A Good book. Writing quality is good. Good grammar. World building is fine as well.
the idea of the story, the plot, and the world background make this story awesome to read but the writing quality become so bad coz so much mismatch naming and inconsistency in using one name. hope in the next chapter it will get better. keep it up
I had of fun to read this amazing story the MC is op but that doesn't make the story boring or bad but in my opinion better. The update quality is really good with at least 1 chapter per day .The length of the chapters are pretty good and satisfying.All Main characters are properly developed and are still gaining experience and development.The writing quality is above what is normal in webnovel With little to no grammatical mistakes All in all a satisfying experience to read and I'm thrilled to read what happens nextPs: English is not my main language so sorry for any grammatical mistakes
Novel isn’t bad but it is basically a copy of several other novels of take disciples to get stronger. Now my complaints are the novel is redundant in a lot of its sentences. The examples of this are when it says the mc took bottles of mixtures to make a mixture that is poisonous and another blatant one was the enemy is very powerful and its defense is shockingly powerful
Hey author! I don't know who you are. I don't know what you want. If you're looking for stones or gems, I can tell you I don't have extra I am a cheap person... but what I do have are a very particular set of skills. Skills I have acquired over a very long career. Skills that make me a nightmare for people like you. If you drop this novel go now, that will not be the end of it - I will not only look for you, I will not only pursue you... but if you do drop this, I will look for you, I will find you... and I will kill you...kimosabe...
I will try keep this short and simple (cus I talk more than I need most of the time lol) It's a very good story! I don't see any real issues with it, and the only (small) thing I thought should be improved was not repeated again, so that is amazing. I enjoyed reading it and wasn't bored out. There are no grammatical mistakes I have seen so you can be assured that when reading it will be fluid. Dialogues are concise yet informational and descriptions are vivid. I did not feel like wasting my time after reading the chapters and do not regret it at all. Will I continue reading this? Definitely. Have I added it to my library? Of course.Seriously, this is a hidden gem. Don't be fooled by the lack of book cover or if you don't necessarily like the synopsis. This is better than most within its' group!
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