JJFrancis
Perdon pero esta super aburrido, utiliza mucho el "oh no! Este monstruo es mas fuerte que el que acabo de pelear! Esta vez si morire!!" Aparte de la interaccion con las personas esta muy aburrido, si no mejora creo que le dare drop.
Loving the story so far.. and the readable writing quality. No MTL or unreadable english. Hoping you don't drop it. Would love to see how this story continues to develop, love the OP MC vibe.
no me gusto la verdad pero no soy de mete estrecha y le dare una estrella si me preguntas por que no me gusto es solo por la personalidad del mc solo espero que tengas mucho exito en la novela me retiro
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after a veryyyy long time, I'm finallyyy back! the first thing I need to do after coming back on webnovel is to check out sora's novel. I'm so excited to start my journey with sora's new novels yaaaay! congrats for your so many new novels and congrats for me for so many many to read lol
One of the best stories I have ever read. Thank you for this amazing story!
Well made characters with deep personalities and an entertaining mystery.
It's ok till Ch 238. - MC goes to Japan, - learns that shikigami gives divine power (used to upgrade pets) = Shikigami Slaughter - asked where to find more, - arrived at the island full of shikigami cultivated by a family of onmyoujis,- onmyouji arrived and said outsiders are not welcome- MC: "Starting today, X Island will welcome me!"- killed one pet shikigami of onmyouji- MC: "Every man is innocent, but pregnant is guilty,..." (copied mtl)- onmyouji conceded- Sikigami Slaughter Part 2- MC: "The entire X Islands will become my cultivation point for divine power, hahahaha..." (copied mtl)
Mc Acts like he is forced into villianMake everyone hate him so that novel's mc became a hero???Just one wordS.T.U.P.I.D.............,..@,................,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
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Shameless Author review! ;]Here is what you can expect from this book:1. This is not a cultivation world but Earth in the future with apocalypse elements (Not right from the start but from the 2. volume), video game elements, and fantasy elements filled with action, adventure, myths, beasts, creatures and a bit of romance.2. The MC is average but perceptive and a fast learner. He is not menacing nor a loser, but as the story goes on he will slowly learn how to become an antihero.Also, the MC is not a genius, so don't except him know everything! That's where other characters come in!3. This story's first volume is just an appetizer, like a tutorial that shows our MC and the world how things work before throwing them right into the middle of the chaos, which starts at volume 2!4. (Con) At the start the pace may seem fast, not insanely fast, but from chap 40 it slows down, but not too slow. Though, even like that until chap 40, I am sure you will enjoy it just as much as after it! :]5. English is not my first language but I always try to improve so if you see mistakes make sure and feel free to point it out so I can correct them. (Without any toxicity of course.)6. Update is around 1 chap a day, but if I see you kind readers like the story, (Ps or Summoning Pens) I will upload more, around 1-3 chaps, depending on how much support I get and how much time I have on my hands.7. If you are curious about whether this is a harem or not, yes, there will numerous waifus, three to be specific. As for if he ends up with all of them?It will depend on the majority of you. (Though, don't expect 5+ girls drooling after MC, this is not that type of story.)8. I am sure if you give a story a try you won't be disappointed!9.Love you all, peace out!
