Diepack
The concept is good but the execution is very poor. The characters never really grow. Even the mc stays the same. The interaction between the MC and system is the only strong point of this novel.The racism in this novel is off the charts. The Chinese are basically the kind generous country and the author will remind that to you every once in a while by making the monsters tell how Chinese can be easily be manipulated and are such nice and kind people. Every non-chinese person is evil(author will sure to tell you that) and out to destroy China. The only "good" organisation that deals fairly with monsters is the Chinese government.
"Listen up everybody, please don't misunderstand the captain, we won't be facing the enemy, this is just a reckon mission after we finish we will go back and wait for the king's orders. God's teach stated that the enemies has varying strength if we are lucky, the enemy this time maybe would be a weak one and after our kingdom's victory we may also win a own Sky Radiance Tower". Explained the lieutenant while trying to boost the party's moral.
"But I was just---" and she got interrupted when Seojoon spoon fed her.
"No, Captain! I dare not!"
She grasped at her writing tablet and magic pen and wrote about two words with shaking hands before stopping. The letters didn't seem like anything and both blood and tears fell on the paper around her hand. She gritted her teeth and scratched what she was writing in frustration. This didn't seem to appease her enough because she scratched it a dozen times more before ripping off the paper from the table and reducing it to shreds.
its a great novel but if he is a archer why would you give him blonde hair he would be sniping from a distance wouldn't that make him way easier to spot
over all this is a good story to read a bit bad here and there with the grammer not the spelling the way the words are put together in order to form a sentance espically in those older chapters other than that its a good read
The girl on the bench picked up her phone again. "Sorry about that, but they're gone now. Look, like I was saying. I've only met you twice since then, and if you're not here I don't know if I'll get another chance. Mom and dad aren't too happy about it you know."
beautiful, i can perceive the feelings of the Queen ?
good book and very intejdjduzbskzizbsbziznzbshzjz zzhz
As of 340 chapters read because author refuses to talk to experienced published writers on how to properly develop characters over time. You always end up feeling a little bit sick of the main characters when they are just as morally grey if not straight up evil and untrustworthy as the villains you are building him up to go against. Nothing changed about MCs overall goal but literally everything else did. Becomes the most self righteous, ungrateful, and even just straight evil character in the world. The specters are supposed to be unfeeling, and he acts exactly the same as a Spector would just for his own self-righteousness. Felt like he killed a brother who gave him everything and tried to change himself if order to support him, just cuz of his own petty feelings about an inconsequential event that he holds trauma about. Fell off harder than Supremacy Games, somehow.
I see Dragon, I add to library. Being complex creatures and characters at that, it can be frustrating to write, this IK because I've come to love and even have them as my main characters. So I forsho know the Author will deliver ✨️.
