I started reading this two days before this review and let me tell you, ive binged all 288 chapters currently released. This novel is so far my favorite Novel on this entire platform. The brilliance of the Background, character development, and overall the writing in general, speaks leaps and bounds of wgat separates this masterpiece from the abundance of writing on this site. There are no info dumps and the characters pasts as well as the worlds past, come gradually and are expertly implemented inti the story in an ebtertaining and shockingly perfect way. Also may i commend the author for writing the mc so well. You by far made the correct choice in making the mc so edgy, it solidifies the uniqueness and masterful complexity of the novel. The plot twists constantly keep me on the edge of my seat and reading for hours. The chapter length is perfectly sized to not be too long nor too short, but right in the sweet spot. I am personally very excited to see what you will do with Hanah’s charcter. I could go on and on about how perfect this novel is but i will never explain it good enough to do it justice, just know that you should read this. You will not regret reading this absolute masterpiece, but keep in mind it takes time for the development of everything, but you will see how that only makes it even more perfect.
It is absolutely hilarious how webnovel will release the first 40 chapters with perfectly fine translations only to completely drop the ball the next second. As for the reason why they expect anyone to pay money for these awful translations is beyond me. To anyone reading this review, don't bother using your fp or coins on this hot trash of a translation.
I read the mtl of tge story. Story apparently ends a little over 500 chapters in with an authors note at the end, the ending is definitely meh with the story basically dragging in the later half due to author losing motivation and creativity. The final fight is just mc suicide bombing his opponent twice then grabbing his family and after that an authors note where he says he lost motivation for continuing to write it and as an answer for the questions he rose in the story to try and motivate himself it becomes a yah sure he did it…
Oh, got another video game novel in the works to read.Get yourself ready for another amazing story filled with action strength and the potential to reach the top.
I've read berserk and this reminds me a lot of it I can't wait to see what happens next especially when it's as dark as thisps takeyoshi sensei do us justice with this novel
I was just randomly trying not so popular books, but this really is a gem. The writing style is very good and fits with the theme and world. It combines many of my favorite tropes while bringing all the good parts of these tropes to the foreground. Mystery, magic, cultivation, it has it all without being convoluted. And above all, I don't feel like I am reading a story for braindead people, like most novels on WN.
Okay, let's see, I read through it and caught up quite quickly since the chapters weren't too long. The story doesn't have a 5/5 rating from me since I noticed a lot of grammar mistakes and typos, not any usage of unique words, even though she was explaining from the Author's Narrative, also using the word "Mum" seemed a bit too unprofessional. Though, the story was pretty fast-paced which is what readers like, Just the two first chaps alone moved like from 1 to 50. Like in the first chapter she got an order to save someone who's been kidnapped and boom step-sister in the next chapter. Overall it was a good read, I recommend reading it!!
I don't remember much as I read it long time ago and I thing I only read it like 20-50 chapter so u can say this is not a review but my deep shit frustration to this novel.1) mc is a dumb ass bitch mother fucking 0 iq appshit.why? because he want to be strong and unlike some dick green head in some anime he actually work hard.and he got a good monster as price.now you all thing that's genuinely a good mc as he hard work and strives for what he wants right?no he reject the monster For stupid silver sparrow.now I don't know if this sparrow is transformed to some mighty phenoix or not in later chapter.but from what I remember this sparrows is the thotest thot a sparrow can ever be.she act like a queen but we all know she a bitch.if anything I will bitch slap that sparrow and drill it into the mc's ass.2)what ever shit mc do he won't make any progress.i mean he actually gets strong superfast in some deep macho art that require being a masochist.but even after it he can't beat any bitch.more over he is in some deep shit relation with the sparrow I thing as he is a beta mc who actually get trolled by a freaking sparrow.not any heroine (if he got any.the way this story going he will gets ntred for sure)but a freaking sparrow.its like he won't even have a courage to **** a sparrow and teach her the place she belong but alas mc has dick that's smaller than a sparrows ass.3)the whole world is weird for me.like the whole world is trying to NTR mc.you will get this feel when you read.like how much good he is on something but nobody cares.at the sametime some rich kid tried some half ass shit then here you go the genius of the century.like the world is trying to prove that mc is some mc of an hentai NTR manga.i don't like that wibe at all.4)did I talk about the sparrow?she is a bitch a bitch that is born from bitch,for a bitch and all the bitch.by the bitch ,to the bitch and all the bitch English word could muster.and worst of all she can't even be usefull as a bitch.
nth new....yes that's right..nth new.... why waste time on this when we can read other new ideas........alot of other novels with great story are waiting to be read
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