KevinHarper1476
I'm not done reading the entire chapters but I must say I love your choice of words.
The saying '18-year-old child and 9-year-old adult' is so comical.
The characters are built up very well that we got to see their addictions in the first chapter.
Nice book author.
So far loving everything. Especially our MC not being stupid and immediately going for the new personality, thing.
Writing Quality: So far so good, I haven't seen any particular big grammatical errors
Stability of Updates: A regular update of once every second day. Which is an easy perfect score.
Story Development: Haven't really read enough to say much about it but I like the build up for upcoming events and such.
Character Design: Best part of the story.
World Background: I have already gotten a great input of multiple different things but not a lot politically, wich is a big thing for me.
So yeah, loving this so far and recommending it to anyone who loves intelligent and scheming protagonists.
I've read 20 chapters and in those chapters the MC remains a simp and he doesn't even know how to use attribute points. Worst experience reading ?
nothing interesting it just ur usual recycled piece but watin I sabi ????????????????????????????????????
I don’t understand the people who are praising the translation, it’s not that good with a lot of errors.
Goes premium after just 20 chapters...Goes premium after just 20 chapters...
Generally great quality, good dialogue and 3 dimensional personalities. The author makes an effort to have past events affect future characteristics which improves continuity.
Hello, I am fellow reader passing by. just saw came. I enjoyed this very first chapter. I know it's too early for a review. But came here to comment about this. Since still there is only one chap, I am not capable of describing the plot. Yet, Enjoyable. So I think the author will understand and don't get mad at me for this not well reviewed,review. ?
Writing Quality: Author vividly describes the scenes that had taken part in the novel that will allow the readers to fully immerse within the world of the novel. Definitely excellent writing quality!Story Development: Author used the system cliche very well to make it intriguing to read that wouldn't bore out the readers. Also, NO HAREM!!!Character Design: Three words- Not Beta MC. Do I have to elaborate? I think not. We readers already know the importance of the mc not being beta.Updating Stability: Author updates daily. What more can you ask for?World Background: A bit of an info dump at the start but the author was aware of it so he didn't made it too much of an info dump and prevented it from boring the readers. kudos to the author!Overall: A must read! The fact that the MC isn't Beta is already one of the best thing about this novel. And... NO HAREM!!! Hurray!!!
A sweet novel that deserves to waste my time, but oh animal, it is necessary to stop it and re-adjust it from the beginning and the new. I currently consider it a fall, my stupid brother????
i think i read 100 or above novel like these types with a little diff with eachother they are all a chinese the great chinese good al bad chinese this chiese that my genre is op mc but this is not up to my taste it's trash all chinese look 99% same so i think there thinking is same trash again
Great lighthearted novel! It seems as though the novel is planned out from the very beginning. Things that are happen hundreds of chapters back are connected to things currently happening. R-18 content is written very well and does not occur too much that it detracts from the plot. The story is also very interesting and not your typical weak to strong MC story. Comedy is also great in this novel.
