KevinHarper1476
authors waste 24 chapters on basically nothing and instead of locking it in 30 chapters like most writers do he literally locks it at the 25th chapter with nothing have happened how are we suppose to be excited to even want to pay more for such a story?? 25 chaotwrs wat asf on playful sister interactions and how his mom and dad keep saying sorry about your health
This is a very good story about two characters who are attracted to each other and fumbling to find ways to get to know the other person.The emotions feel realistic and the characters are likeable. Definitely recommend reading this.
I think the story is well written, and so is the world building and concept.
OMG this book is worth it??? the beginning made me read it and I'm already hooked ???
Loving this book so farrr!! Give me more angst pls ?. Hopefully they start using their powers meaningfully soon, if would be sick to see. Hoping for a hundred more chapters on the wayyy!!
The beginning was interesting, but the author doesn't know how to carry the story, it got to a point where it became very boring and there are more than 50 chapters in which the MC doesn't appear and there are only secondary stories, it has the harem tag but in 200 chapters no one has appeared, in one chapter he says one thing and then completely changes it in the next.A lot of wasted potential.Don't waste your time reading, it's not worth it.
I love it so much, I love the way they presented the characters and the interactions, can't wait for the next chapters. I'm anticipating!!!
as their sky.
However it was different this time.
"Okay, my name is Mocha and this is the cookie room and sometimes they give us candy" Mocha said with a smile and introduced me to the other children, some tried to hold me down because of their size, but I easily avoided them and that caused all the children will start to take it as a game of catching me.
I saw a grid with measurements of 2 meters by 2 meters with 2 buttons on the top saying deposit and withdraw, looking around i saw the antique table in the backyard and wanted to try it out, i tapped on the deposit button and the camera on the phone started, aiming at the table i tapped on it and the table disappeared. Hurriedly i check on the storage and saw that the table was there occupying a little less than 1sqm. I tapped on withdraw then the the table and it reappeared in front of me. I did this cycle 3 times just to make sure it was not a fluke. A huge grin was on my face as i was formulating plans that would make use of this virtual storage space.
