The first thing to say would be the unique way of author's writing as this is the first time I read a story written in such a way. And honestly, it is good. Just POV and the third-person perspective confused me at first but then it became clear. Keep it up.
In my opinion this is probably one of the best novel i've ever read. Sorry for not giving u guys better review cuz this is my first time ever giving review. Matters aside, u guys should try this novel.
GUYS STOP READING THIS STUPID NOVEL... JIANG HE BECAME A MURDERER!!!!!!!!!!!... IM READING THE RAW AND IM AT THE LATEST CHAPTER... WHEN HE BECAME STRONG HE KILLED ALL THE DISCIPLES OF A SECT.. ALL OF THEM EVEN THE INNOCENT.. JUST BECAUSE SOMEONE AT THE SECT WANT TO KILL HIM.. ANOTHER ONE IS HE KILLED ALL OF THE FOX CLAN(SECT) CAUSE 1 OF ITS FOX IS ATTACKING THE CITY... HE KILL THEM ALL.. THEY ATTACK JIANG HE BECAUSE HIS NOT EXPLAINING ANYTHING.. HE JUST GO TO THE SECT PLACE AND DEMANDING TO TALK AND HIS TOTALLY BEING UNREASONABLE.... SO OF COURSE LIKE A NORMAL INTELLIGENT BEING YOU WILL GET ANGRY... THEN HE KILLED THEM ALL JUST BECAUSE OF THAT.. MOTHERFKER... AND ALSO WHEN THE ANCESTORS OF THOSE SECTS THAT HE DESTROYED COME TO EARTH HE KILLED THEM... THEY JUST WANT TO SEE THEIR DESCENDANTS... WTF.... AND NOW INTO THE LATEST CHAPTER WITH THE "WESTERN GOD" HE ALSO KILLED THEM ALL.. BECAUSE ONE OF THE ENVOY HUMILIATED ONE OF HIS FRIEND.. THEY JUST WANT TO PREACH.. JIANG HE STOP THEIR MAGNIFICENT DESCENT SO OF COURSE THEY WILL GET ANGRY.. SO HE KILLED THEM ALL EVEN THO ZEUS ALREADY WANT TO JUST TALK IT OUT.. BUT NO.. HE DOESNT EVEN LET HIM FINISH HIS SENTENCE.... HIS A FUCKER...
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so after like chapter 7 there are alot of time skips and sporadic gaps in the story. simply making the story way to fast pace to keep track of the story's concept has alot of potential, but to many gaps.
I really like quick transmigration stories and this one looks promising. There's not enough chapters yet to really judge how good it will be but the protagonist seems likable and the story of the first mission has a lot of fun potential. Looking forward to more chapters ^^
Copy and paste of the other system store owner novels, except worse.First off, the writing quality is abysmal. It's to the point where it's hardly legible. Theres a couple different qualities of MTL's, and this is arguably one of the worst. The writing quality outright ruins the novel to begin with.The story development, character design, and world background are extremely poor. I can't say much about the world background since I didn't read that far, but based on how much this is copying from other novels, I can only give it two stars. Characters? Same as other system store novels. First customer is a young master who incidentally buys seemingly overpriced goods and is amazed about how good they are, thus leading to new customers. Story development? Well, I'm just going to skip over that, just a blatant copy.Overall, this novel is pretty substandard, even for this site.
Another novel with a piece of trash mc. 140 characters mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm
the book is just gorgeous because the main character is special and an oddball (I like it) well, the plot is straight fingers lick I wish this book promotion
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Could stop reading
I love it so so much