Writing an updated review. Still loving this book for what it is. A light novel isekai at its best, with characters grounded somewhat in reality, a smart MC, and a dash of heart.
The poor grammar kills the novel literally... it's difficult to understand... unless you read similar novels that have to do with cultivations. This novel needs an editor badly!!!
The MC does not resemble any Young Master of any Qidian or Wuxia Novel I've read soo FarFrom Being excited to disappointed People will alwayz have different tastesBut why Give the MC who already has enough Talent??A God System A God (literally)Yet he can't even level up or do any MeaningFul Young Master thingsWhen has there ever been a Virgin Notorious Young Master who is known for Visiting brothels???You show pipo with Cultivation Speed 90+ yet 50chaps in they haven't even begun Cultivating when ey have the technique....The MC is the 1st to know abwt a Beast Tide yet he doesn't even prepare for AnythingAll the Young Masters in any Novelhave ambition n do all to make sureTHEIR AMBITION IS fulfilledYEt this Young Master does nothingWith all his talents and advantages still stuck on 1 levelWHATS his Difference frm Normal Cultivators???Why give him a System even The God??Better to remove it allAs a Fellow Reader do Check system Novels like USS n TSS even MP and see how they handle their MCs
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Somebody once told me the world is gonna roll meI ain't the sharpest tool in the shedShe was looking kind of dumb with her finger and her thumbIn the shape of an "L" on her foreheadWell the years start coming and they don't stop comingFed to the rules and I hit the ground runningDidn't make sense not to live for funYour brain gets smart but your head gets dumbSo much to do, so much to seeSo what's wrong with taking the back streets?You'll never know if you don't goYou'll never shine if you don't glowHey now, you're an all-star, get your game on, go playHey now, you're a rock star, get the show on, get paidAnd all that glitters is goldOnly shooting stars break the moldIt's a cool place and they say it gets colderYou're bundled up now, wait till you get olderBut the meteor men beg to differJudging by the hole in the satellite pictureThe ice we skate is getting pretty thinThe water's getting warm so you might as well swimMy world's on fire, how about yours?That's the way I like it and I never get boredHey now, you're an all-star, get your game on, go playHey now, you're a rock star, get the show on, get paidAll that glitters is goldOnly shooting stars break the moldHey now, you're an all-star, get your game on, go playHey now, you're a rock star, get the show, on get paidAnd all that glitters is goldOnly shooting starsSomebody once asked could I spare some change for gas?I need to get myself away from this placeI said yep what a conceptI could use a little fuel myselfAnd we could all use a little changeWell, the years start coming and they don't stop comingFed to the rules and I hit the ground runningDidn't make sense not to live for funYour brain gets smart but your head gets dumbSo much to do, so much to seeSo what's wrong with taking the back streets?You'll never know if you don't go (go!)You'll never shine if you don't glowHey now, you're an all-star, get your game on, go playHey now, you're a rock star, get the show on, get paidAnd all that glitters is goldOnly shooting stars break the moldAnd all that glitters is goldOnly shooting stars break the mold
Entertaining sports Novel. Really appreciating all the news updates and interviews which provide more insight and background to the story.Would like to see more character building and introduce 1 or 2 more characters to interact with MC. Flesh out MCs life outside the NBA and add a Friend that can go with him or increase Lawson and others roles. Since MC is from the Future have him talk to management about a couple of draft picks(1 or 2 allstars and role players). Hope to see 1 of his teammates from ABCD camp to get drafted to his team and he starts to develop his friendship with Brandon Roy, Iguodala and other nba players.
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I know this novel has received lot of negative review from many readers but i personally like this novel and give it 5 star.Well yes thr seems to be almost no story plot now and seems strange but i quite like the things that happen in this novel such as the joke they made and seems similar to a setting like Zero no Tsukaima.
This is plagiarism, the story is from Royal Road, and after glancing through it's actually got nothing original in his at all, he's not even trying to hide the fact that he stole it.
Xia Shishu was an ordinary 17-year-old high school student with immortal story love. System chose him as its Host,System looks quite normal, but his mindset gradually changed as time passed. System that allowed him to transcend the limitations of the human body!His sister’s persistence in addition to the emergence of his System, Xia Shishu entered the newly released Virtual Reality game, Second Reality! To his amazement, the items he received in-game can also be taken outside to the real world and vice-versa!With a combination of his System & Second Reality, his life should become more amusing!I love story but no up date for 6 month. So I gues droped ):
so is this a NTR novel?..................
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