The beginning is quite captivating. The story develops at a steady pace while not lowering it's quality, with the only problem being grammar but just some minor mistakes here and there. The character descriptions are basic and simple though, but doesn't ruin the story and is enough to still let you imagine the character. World building is, as usual, what you would expect of a fantasy story which can be a good thing.All in all, a great read to say the least.Keep up the good work!
I absolutely love this book. Bean reading it for almost a year now and I hope to continue reading it for years to come. The characters are well thought ot and developed with thither own personalities. No cookie- cutter character troupes send basic every guy is evil and every girl is beautiful/ in live with the MC. Plot armor is there of course but is not so thick as not ti be ever overcome. The MC is smart, tactful, honest, devious, lucky, but not all powerful. You can honestly feel the roots the MC head to dig himself out from to climb his way towards the top. The In- game aspect of the story is exciting to the point of addiction, and the RL-aspect of the game is a nice and welcome addition to the story that it's both well thought out and necessary. If I could recommend this story directly to a hundred peaple I would ragland it to a thousand. If I could give the story ten stars I would want to give it twenty. If you want a great story, with twist and turns, detailed but easy to follow plot, and manageable info- dumps that don't rant on and on. This is your kind if book.
It's a pretty good novel. I hope it gets picked........................................................................................................
I just want to say that your intro and starting of the novel was great and all until you reach chapter 44..the mc meets a girl and becomes flipping retarded by giving in to a girl just because she is pretty...the mc was just about to get op but noooooo! The freaking author just had to ruin it by doing this crappy character development. Manipulative, and controlling females? Not my cup of tea. Sorry but im dropping this novel. Was great while it lasted.
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typical sign in novel good at first then the later plot will become boring, no matter what sign in novel there is only one thing will happen, it will become bland and boring.
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Started off strong but now its just bland and boring. character development has halted and everything just feels like filler. Really disappointed as ive invested so much time Into this book. just end the book already.
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A very light and heart warming story. It gives you different types of people and views in life. Keep it up! It’s a great story about family, friends,life and also for Ones self
Hello the book was really good. I really liked the character designs. The plot was very good to you don’t know what could happen next.
The story is very interesting Pls who are the main characters of this novel