good book..
This book is so boring and nothing new. The author has 0 creativity! The story revolve around the main character, going to new places to level up, kill all the enemies and move on! The story line is so bad it will shock you for 3days and 3nights! (Often use my the author)
Great book on the the second one can’t wait to find out what happens with her magic
Nice story hopefully not a years before it will end.
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One of my favorites by this author!
I've read a few of this authors books and every single one is just a perfect emotional roller coaster, you're a wonderful writer and have a regular follower for future books, read these books, the whole series you won't regret it ...
nice story
She never finished the book. It’s been couple months.
this is one amazing book. cant wait for more chapters. i keep checking everyday for updates
Solid storyline and minimal grammatical errors. Enjoyable read.
Okay so this power outage scene is honestly one of the funniest plot devices I've seen in a while. It's not just a random comedic bit—it actually does THREE things at once. First, it kills the romantic tension between Shen Xingyao and Pei Yanqiu in the most humiliating way possible. Second, it introduces this absolutely unhinged neighbor who becomes this running joke. And third, it sets up the whole 'sounds through thin walls' situation that forces them into this weird intimate conversation. The real plot twist though? The QQ voice call from her game CP. I love how the author uses this to create immediate jealousy from Pei Yanqiu while also showing us that Shen Xingyao has this whole secret gaming life she's been hiding. She blacklists him so fast—"Not playing anymore, not playing ever again!"—and honestly? Same energy. I would've done the same thing. But then the agent's call comes in and suddenly the plot shifts gears completely. We go from romantic comedy awkwardness to "you're fired if you don't show up tomorrow." That's a solid stakes injection right when the reader might be getting complacent. The caregiver scam subplot is also brilliant—Shen Xingyao realizing she got ripped off by five thousand yuan shows she's actually paying attention now, unlike the original owner who would've just accepted it. This is character growth disguised as a minor comedic beat.