Oh. My. Gosh. Priscilla is so adorable, with what happened in the latest chapter my heart bleeds for her, I wish I could just hug her. Keep up the amazing work and you will rise to the top!!
I wouldn't lie, at the start of the story I was impatient because I felt those reasons behind why Charlotte was here in the strange world was long, I saw the importance of her backstory needed. but I still feel it would have been revealed latter in the story. But I'm impressed!i want to open the locked chapters because of how interesting you weave your words. What makes me amused is the fact you keep changing Alpha Jack’s pack’s name. I love it.?
It is really good for my liking they describe the world good it is really a good book asrid is the main character right? cool name
"When Pride Meets" swept me off my feet with its well-rounded characters and emotional depth. The chemistry between Ethan and Emily is palpable, and the witty dialogue kept me hooked. A must-read for romance fans!"
Whoa!!!.This is incredibly an epitomized form of fiction writing. With a perfect down to earth description of characters and Dole. I must say the author is apparently good with pouring out every single details to instigate a perfect imagination for readers. Waiting on more chapters
even though I haven't read the whole story but I can't feel it's interesting ?
reviewing for the fp. It seems like an interesting setup.
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When you told you're going to participate in a december WPC, i didn't expect you to participate for male leading fantasy category, and it's really well written?
The first chapter was amazing ???, looking forward to the rest
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This book started out phenomenally but it nose dived in my opinion. The Abyssal Saga was easily the best.. The Story telling, the character interactions, you felt more connected to the characters. I feel like the quality of writing went downhill after Variant reached Rank 7 (Celestial)... I don't feel anything for any of the characters now. Sia had a great story (initially) so did Sarah, Enigma, Evander, Charles Xander, and many more (Bali, Irene, Julius, etc). Shid even Hedon (Abyssal Emperor) had quality to him. You don't feel that connection anymore and the plot feels stale now... I really hate that I'm bashing this book because the writing was Amazing for the first 1100 chapters, and actually great up until 1400 and some change. I finally decided to drop at almost 1600 chaps, but the author still deserves his flowers for the 1st 1300 or so chapters