The major flaw in this type of work is the same: social isolation. Humans were made to grow in society, a forum is not a substitute for that. Do you want to make this story interesting? Make the MC start to wonder if the forum really is real people, nothing: - I have a system to be jealous of. Make MC want to use the system trying to escape. The essence of this story should be a prison break, not instagram competition.
its goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood but only problem is that its been a year or so and no more chapters have been made i like the story but no chapters? kinda sad
Quite good at start but there are a lot of problems with this novel:A lot of unnecessary informationMoral thingsSays Alex/Shang is not dumb(proceeds to not sleep and keep going even though he is going in more danger. it's just asking for death but he is still alive because of how thick his plot armor is.)
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This is plagiarized from a Korean Webnovel. Stop passing it off as your 'original novel'. Have some basic human decency and learn some morals. Do not support plagiarizers.
The characters were amazingly written, honestly, I liked the way the author is very excitedly engaging the readers with the novel. World background and the thrill, cliffhangers were my favorite. keep it up, author!
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This is a relacing read but its a shame that it did not get picked. The ML is interestingly unassuming and the story is different from what I usually read. That is a good thing, as sometimes its nice to broaden's one horizons. I cannot talk about other characters as its early yet. But I like this story.
thanks for the effort and moreeeeeeeeeeee moreeeeeeeeeee moreeeeeeeeee moreeeeeeeee moreeeeeeeeemoreeeeeeeeeeee moreeeeeeeeeee moreeeeeeeeee moreeeeeeeee moreeeeeeeeemoreeeeeeeeeeee moreeeeeeeeeee moreeeeeeeeee moreeeeeeeee moreeeeeeeeemoreeeeeeeeeeee moreeeeeeeeeee moreeeeeeeeee moreeeeeeeee moreeeeeeeee
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I think this is gonna be a great book! Lol as the author I gotta make sure of it! I hope you guys out there enjoy my work:).P.S. kind feel bad about the 5 star review on my own book