An awesome novel.Completely underrated.Writing quality and update stability are very good.Author also has good control over the book's story development and world background.Give it a try.
Nice story overall, love it.Hope you keep it up Author.
This looks like another incredible work, I know how much hardwork you put in this.I will be enjoying this novel for the time being...Anyways, goodluck author! I'll support you!
Good book. Just one small problem with the title.
Review after reading 19 chapters.Grammar: 5/5. I have no complaints whatsoever about the grammar of this book. There are close to zero errors and the sentence structuring is top notch. Overall, a 5/5 for me.Story: 5/5 So far, the story has been intruiging and captivating. They are no cliche tropes and the story is comedic as well. The characters actually have personalities and dont feel like blank slates. The interactions are funny and nice to read. Overall, the story so far has been refreshing. Straight 5/5 for me.World Building: Spot on is the only phrase i can use to describe the world building of this novel. Its detailed and realistic, 2 ingredients for any novel with excellent world building. I feel like i actually have a direction when reading the story. Another 5/5 for me.The MC’s are excellent in my book. The twins have personalities that compliment each other and I can actually feel the brotherhood between them.This story is simply a gem. Read it if you want to read something new and engaing. If the author keeps up the good work, I can easily see this story becoming one of the best, if not the best, cultivation novels on this site.
gud but could be best.concept is great. a New theme Chinese cultivation plus game transmission n all.its great But cud b betterif mc alone transported with his sect n pupils or beasts but y the whole heaven thingy..it left a bad taste.And the way mc just get scared of abnormalities (which is not bad n common)But he just forgets it all next day (or chapter) He goes all spineless to god from like next chapter.that put me off.Any way great story,nice plot and room for growth.Thank You?
Writing quality is bad. There are some chapter in which the author tries using proper grammer (probably with the help of some software), but a lot of chapters are just straight up horrible, and barely readable. From sentences that make sense and weird random words in places they don't belong, to flipping back and forth between first and third person perspectives and weird tense changes. It's all in there.The writing quality makes this novel hard to enjoy.Only give this a try if you're not really bothered by poor writing quality.Besides that, from what I've read, things all seem like a fairly generic xianxia novel. Nothing too special, but also not horribly boring.
Everything about the novel is good... but you destroy smut scenes either you write it right or you don't write it.. those who want to read them would not want to see mall and car and different stuff in there... i hope you will change it.. of you write it then write it right
the best novel of cultivation i have ever read no arrogant haughty overpowered mcs no romance or harem and the way mc is written with a perfect balance of comedic foodie and the story is good with no plot holes truly amazing a bit shy of translation quality but excellent concept for the story
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From the little I've read this seems like it will be an amazing book. I will review after I'm further along to let you know if I still think that is the case.
Teacher : How old is your father ?Kid : He is 6 years oldTeacher : What? How is that possible?Kid : He became my father only when I was born..Logic!!