You got yourself a good story going and l really like it how it is going on in the story l hope you keep going and it’s really good it’s something different l am seeing on here
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Poorly executed plot. Translator leaves much of the chinese language as is without providing explanations to the inside jokes or references that the author makes. This is nothing shot of pure laziness. There's a few specific chapters that involve a cell phone and some texting app, the only problem is that as the reader we have absolutely no clue what's going on. No translator notes, no editor notes, nothing. 5 Chapters of the 34 that I read are completely incomprehensible in relation to the plot because this translator is lazy.
Besides that, I did mention that the plot was poorly executed. What I mean by that is that there's little to no segway into the actions the main character makes. Often times the author skips over explanations of situations or such explanations aren't translated well enough for the reader to understand what's happening. This ties into the translator being lazy.
Concept wise, it's very interesting. I've read about similar concepts in other novels, but it's original enough to still feel fresh considering the overall bland nature of this genre. This is of course hampered by the lack of explanations from the author or the poorly translated explanations from the lazy translator.
Much of the novel is lost in translation. Much of the novel is marketed towards people in China/Korea, it's not really meant for English audiences, I wouldn't be surprised if such people would have difficulty in relating to situations described in the novel.
The author is very bad at writing fighting scenes. A lot of the background in such scenes is bland and lackluster with lack of detail. The combat is also poorly described.
Overall, a lot is lacking with this novel.
Anyone who wants to help can comment in the latest chapter, or here, we need editors to improve chapter grammar, who has time to talk to me, I'm sure it will be much better to read with editing, remembering that the best stories here at Webnovel there are always editors to help.
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Interesting MMORPG Novel! Not usual for a Novel Subject. Will continue reading this! This Novel is the type that will make you hooked up by the story.
No thanks. Not another martial arts cultivation novel with OP MC or with the one time use face-slapping villains just to be compared with the Mc.
I realy like this , a story that holds you back and makes you want more and more chapters, this congratulations writer, a well-built setting without much appeal with well-developed characters!
This is the sequel to one of my favorite books, Exodus: The Assassin's Path. GnG picks up the adventures with 20-year-old QJ as the MC. It releases 4 or 5 chapters a week and is well written. There are plenty of new chapters and a new Exodus game introduced, Guns and Gore. For the die-hard TAP fans, Leah, Quinn, Mojo and the rest are present and active in this sequel. Worth the read.
Really love the way you have started and i really like the details you have given.Looking forward to more chapters.I feel it will be a wonderful story
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Great story till now. Hope the quality is maintained
I have not read the book completely but I am truly impressed by the dedication of this man. He is writing an eastern fantasy, which mainly contains Chinese fantasy and he is writing it in English and he is born in Nepal.