I was initially interested in this novel, and I read to chapter 182. I enjoy reading slice of life system novels. However, this novel took a very weird turn.When the main character first got the system, the system told him that there wouldn't force him to do anything dangerous. However, all of a sudden there is now a life or death competition against other system holders? Wasn't this supposed to be a slice of life pet store novel? Why did it change so fast?Normally I wouldn't care all that much about this competition, but the problem is the main character literally has no reason nor motivation to participate in this. The only reason he is the owner of a pet shop is because his parents died, and so he wanted to take over. The reason the main character started capturing this mystical pets is basically, "why not?".Anyway, this story is pretty slow. The main character focuses on the mystical pets he has 100% of the time, why is kinda disappointing for a pet store owner that has 10 - 30 pets and only focusing on three of them. (So far) Normally in a story like this, you'd expect a lot of cute moments, because well, the main character owns a pet store. However, those are far and wide, nowhere to be seen. The story is extremely slow and repetitive, to the point of annoyance. However, this novel does have some good comedy. Like when the main character implied communism would be a good idea. The translation quality of this novel is pretty mid. Everything is understandable, but they randomly change the names of various characters/pets. It's extremely confusing because they literally have two different names for a character in a single chapter.Overall, the novel is decent, but the fact that the author drones on and on about random stuff really makes this novel too slow to bear. I am unsure why they put a action-plot in a slice of life novel, but whatever.
What a rare find, a vrmmo novel that's actually good. Writing this review here in hopes to encourage author san. To those deliberating whether to read or not, defs read. it's one of the good ones!
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I give you five star young man keep on writing!!!I give you five star young man keep on writing!!!I give you five star young man keep on writing!!!
Easy peasy lemon squeezy it so cheesy its almost sleazy book review! great work, author, you make lots of basic typing/grammatical errors like repeat words or just the wrong word in the wrong spot, but besides these hiccups i love it.
The story is nice and all... but sometimes it feels like you write in a hurry, I mean, you sometimes skip events a lot and also pass some nice points in the story so easily. it's as if you want to force the story to move faster. please don't hurry and take your time, let the story grow by itselfBut except that everything else is fine, I like the characters and the mysterious storyline.
So there aren‘t that much chapters yet but from what i read, it is amazing!I really love the plotline and i hope it stays that amazing!Definitely worth a try!
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The story is actually fine, read other review for that. This is a review on webnovel. WHY THE FRICK WOULD YALL CHOOSE A BOOK WITH a GRAND TOTAL of 2 VOTES!!! WTHECK WEBNOVEL!
Hey shameless author here, I hope you are enjoying the story so far and I sincerely apologize if you come across any error in my writing. thanks for your understanding......
Gaya bahasa yang unik dapat mudah dipahami, alur cerita yang menarik, membuat novel ini sangat nyaman untuk dibaca, pengalaman membaca menjadi meningkat dengan membaca novel ini