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Still relatively new I would give it a couple more chapters before making a true review....................... . . . . . . . . . . . . . dam this needs 140 characters to work lol will take a while.

A very novel approach for the narration of the story, it takes a bit more time from the reader to get into this alternate world but once in you would get hooked. Keep up the good work author.

Good novel with good background graphics... character design is good and digestible. though, I never thought returnee meant he will come back... it's little tweak and student teacher relationship is good. World background in the game Can be improved but it's enough to enjoy... thanks for another good novel author san

So, here is your author here but I will not just give a shameless review here. I will tell you all the good and the bad points of this novel.You can decide to read it or not after that. The good points:A calm MC: Lu Fei is mature, not brainless just because he's OP or something. He used to be a mercenary in a fantasy world, so he experienced the so called human nature there. He's not a guy who would blush talking to girls or hesitate to even insult them.The game: Ark is going to be one of the highlights of the novel as the whole novel is mostly based on it. NPCs would just like be regular people and the interaction between them and Lu Fei would be one of the highlights of the novel.Weak to strong: Lu Fei would not just become too OP from the start. He would struggle and even die sometimes but he would still be stronger than an average player.Romance: It's one of the points I am confident you will like. It's going to be sweet, like really sweet. There would be more than one girl liking him but I can't say about the harem.Characters: Characters would be unique and even some typical characters will have some unique points or a back story.Chapters: The chapters will be 2k in length, which is above average in WN terms.The bad points: The start: The first ten chapters can get annoying to some people as there would be some info dump and the game part will only start on the 6th chapter.Similar start: Many people will feel that the start is similar to other novels. A debt and a sister to take care of, but it will change as the story will progress.Plot holes: There would be some plot holes in the novel. I can't do anything about it as every novel have it.Not an OP MC: I know that VR novels in WN is filled with an OP MC who had come from the future and knows everything. This is bad point because most of the users look for an OP MC. I can't think of more bad points and it's up to the readers to decide in the end. I will advise the readers to read both bad and good reviews before reading the novel. Give a review, either positive or negative.I don't think there would be any problems with the grammar unless one is a grammar Nazi. I will end my words here.

I already read the books from you and expecting the same level of story telling in this novel also. Already a great start for this novel. Hope there are story lines in both inside and outside the games like in other novel of yours. Waiting for more chapters and the story development. Is your novels published has books or hardcopies to read..

This was certainly something……. There were so many different issues. To list one of them. Author or translator was too lazy to figure out how western names are. They should have never translated the names. The naming sense is ridiculous “white Vivian”. Also this story is pretty confusing and the way people talk is extremely weird. This needs an editor.

I just do not get it. What is wrong with people and why they always like evil MC. I hate it. I mean I understand that people do not like naive MC and I do not like MC with that kind of personality but there is a big difference between naive and nice and good guy. I discovered that during the past two years MC with evil personality are getting more popular and authors like to write this kind of story who knows what is wrong with people.

Knew nothing about the Book but when I saw In The Kingdom Of QinBoom I knew I met that cool interesting book.Was cool and nice to read..

I honestly gotta say that at the moment this is the novel i am looking forward to the most each day. It got a unique setting with a young man whose father died and his mom, an american, actually comes to pick him up and take him to live with her and his 2 halfsiblings and 3 stepsiblings in New York. Which is amazing in my opinion because first of all too few chinese novels take place outside of china, which is why this story is such a breath of fresh air. Secondly he actually lives in a normal patchwork family, his siblings, some care for him more some less, are normal people and his stepfather tries to understand and support him so we actually got a normal western family culture instead of the typical "my father's 7th mistresses' adopted son doesn't like me so i have to kill him" type of bull**** that i am allready so tired of.Furthermore it got a dark theme, an mc that's not fascinated by every beautiful girl that comes by (we actually only have 1 girl that's important at the moment which is amazing) and he is kind of badass with a unique cultivation system where he doesn't kill everybody just because but if somebody tries to really mess with him he goes ham because negative emotions help him cultivate faster so the story gotta stay more on the dark side (nice).As for worldbuilding and pacing they are both nice, even though we don't know much about the wizard world. That's about one of the few things that i don't like about this novel: the word choice of the translator. Everybody who has read enogh wuxia novels will realise that he is actually not a wizard (thanks harry for ruining this term for me) but a gu master, who uses poisonous animals (insects, snakes, reptiles, etc.). That is also why it is so confusing that the word "worm" was chosen to descrobe any kind of poisonous creature the mc encounters: "Wow it's a worm" (he says while looking at a toad)"Such an amazing wizard worm" (he says while looking at a komodo dragon)You get me right? If not for the (kind of) poor word choice, the many grammar mistakes and ****ed up uses of the metric system (a 15 meters long reptile weighs 1.5 kg, sure why not) and the frickin slow update pace this would easily crush most novels that are currently being translated just because of a simple fact:THIS NOVEL IS TRULY UNIQUE AND NOT WUXIA COPY PASTE

One of the smartest mcs I have read about, he is also very mature. Worth a read. Highly reccomended. .......................................................