Odayaka
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Well narrated story..kept me hooked up...I am waiting when Evan will mature......................................................................,.....,.,..................................................Author write chapters a bit fast....If u can do that..it will be excellent......
I just loved it! Though your language is a bit harsh but I love the plot and the way you explained. Book cover is also very cool and I kinda like it. Great work author-kun! I appreciate it!
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This seemed like a better rip-off of Swordman in a something world with the same premise. However, I had thought he would completely focus on cultivation, face slapping, and dominating beauties. Sadly there is only mention of his cultivating once, the rest of the female cast is far too weird to be enjoyable, mc does not cultivate enough, did I mention not enough cultivation. Lame. This is the first time I give such a low review by the way.
Nice book. ?????? to The author.It's true. Enjoyable, funny, cute, suspense....And i love it.I did enjoy reading it from the start that i 4got to post a review ??,??????????????????
Terrible world building especially the description of a modern military organization and modern soldiers. The mc magically has access to a system that gives him perfectly loyal slaves who are subordinates with no depth and magically automatically pledge undying loyalty once bought
Following the unwritten rules and giving myself a 5 star.
please continue this book it us very awesome
The character is one dimensional and the plot literally repeats itself with each no arc. Same events with different characters. I just recently dropped this for the authors terrible plot developments. I don't recommend anyone to read this.
Overall, a novel with good ideas but poor character design. After being framed and sentenced to death for murder, the MC- a violent gang boss- traveled to a parallel world to become part of a police investigation team. He is randomly tied to a system, but when catching criminals, he relies on forced plot development (instead of using brains). I do not like the MC's personality (brash and rude like a gangster); in fact, the original police officer (whose body MC transmigrated into) seemed to have a much better personality compared to MC. I was looking forward to this since we don't have good Chinese detective webnovels (most are Japanese like "Shinrei Tantei Yakumo"), but I was disappointed (my rating was already +1 for having the game system, but character development turned out to be too poor).
Honestly best book on this app
