i just read this book through 6 chapters in an hour in one sitting and i can assure everyone that this is a great book and i need more chapters soon the flowery of language is beautiful and its so well written and there is action and thriller packed to keep u up at night and look i am not exagerating this is a great book good job author need more chapters now pls !
From the title I thought the MC would have three S talents, he only has one SSS talent.
Shameless Author rating his own novel...What to expect from this novel?1. A good System with a good attitude2. An OP MC who crushes his opponents albeit with some difficulty3. Good Fight Scenes
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Thanks for reading!I never intended to post Regency stories here when I started, but then there was a historical romance contest, so I posted the first one. And then... Just when I was requested to continue the story, up popped a contest for commoner consort! >:0And so here we are, and I'm posting two chapters a day, but this means the story will likely be completed shortly after the contest ends.The Marques Waverly was introduced in Kateri Leona, and I have been waffling back and forth over whether to maintain the original three light novels format or combine this one with the next one, in which the Marques moves from romantic interest to main character in his own right.Regarding the spelling of Marques, I chose it as the middle ground between Marquis and Marquess, and all three are pronounced Marky, making him Marky Mark :p (Ok, bad joke, I know.)
I loved how the story was well paced and smooth. The description of the character and their emotions was well done. The explanation was vivid, relatable and also the words were efficient to imagine the situation.It is relatable and wonderful plot!!
I like your Nobel very much. It's kinda mysterious and interesting which is making me more and more curious to keep reading, looking forward to your upcoming chapters and waiting for you to finish this noble quickly if possible if not then also waiting for the ending what will happen.
After reading two chapters, I realized this is a worthwhile novel! I included it in my library to enjoy the evening reading, with a cup of tea and bagel. This is the most! So appreciated by bibliophials! Good book in the evening! Find! 5 stars! I will not write about the merits and possible mistakes.I’ll read more, add a review! In the meantime, I want to express my admiration for the author, for such an amazing book !!! Cool!!!
This book is currently unknown as of the time I’m writing this review but I can tell it’s only a matter of time before this novel blows up and more people start reading it.The writing (until now:chapter 26) is sooo good. I love the whole power idea of cores. The development hasn’t started too much yet but it’s getting there and I can’t wait for more updates to this story. This novel is defintely a recommendation for all people! Thank you author!
Eey author! Stop using fake accounts to boost your popularity and stones to wpc top 1. Its been 7 hrs and you got 61 stones? Stop try faking it! Play fair and square!! If you delete this review, I will post again here and to the forum seeking help. You are denying the effort of various other authors out there . So man up!!!!
Sir Flow, I have read until chapter 5(included), so this review will be based on your first five chapters.Writing Quality;I didn't come across typing mistakes, but there were a few missing words. There were some unnecessarily wordy sentences, but I have never bothered myself with it when reading. I think sometimes even wordy sentences are necessary. You know better than me, sometimes who have to use that word, and your 'wordies' aren't smirking to the reader when reading. :)There are three more serious points in your chapters(Not in your writing quality).Chapters are toooo long. I picked a random chapter, copied it to the Microsoft word, and it said to me there were more than 2.5k words. That isn't actually a problem, but when combined with your too long paragraphs and unnecessary descriptions, it is deadly serious.With short paragraphs, readers will find it easier to read, and it will help retain them. Readers find novels via phone app and website. If you have large paragraphs, readers will find it harder to keep up/read.You are describing almost everything in a scene. You should categorize them under two subjects. The descriptions readers would care and wouldn't care.'Forcing myself to read' term comes from these mistakes in my opinion.Considering your writer carrier in Italy, and you having an editor, my rating for you is 3.5/5.Stability of updates;There is nothing to say. You released 86 chaps in just 94 days. It is a 5/5 in my book.Story development;In my opinion, this is the most complicated aspect of a novel when reviewing it. I have read only 5 chapters, some of the authors even reading less when reviewing. We can't know what will happen in the story. I mean we can be suddenly in a reverse corner in the face of an event in the stories development and everything before the event can gain meaning instantly.I'll only judge one point. Why did you put the flashback in the second chapter? And a long flashback at that. You could put it in a later chapter, or you could keep it ******. The sword picked up my interest in the first chapter, and puff! It disappeared in the second chapter. That's why I am giving you 4/5.Character design;Again it is early to judge with only reading 5 chapters. All I can say everything is looking normal in the first five chapters. As long as the characters don't have contradictions in their characters, it is ok. So, 4,5/5. I didn't give 5/5, because they aren't perfect.World background;Some things weren't clear enough, or I couldn't understand. Are they in a game? If not, is he aware of his system? Or is it everyone's system(like a shared interface)? How much mana does Helial have?These kinds of questions kept popping out in my mind. I won't be harsh about world background since it is early for an accurate judgment.3.5/5 for the world background.P.S; Story is good actually. After reading chap 5, I had the feeling that things will get lively. If the novel didn't have the negative points that I had talked about earlier in this review, I would read it, honestly, despite not having much time after me becoming an author in webnovel.One more thing, Sir Flow had said before, the original story has already reached more than 300 chapter count and it is number one web novel in Italy. I believe your current self is much different from the you from years ago. Keep up the good work :)
It is always nice to have closure on stories that draw you in and make you feel invested. The whole King's Avatar series was enjoyable from beginning to end.