solid 4 star , entertaining and amusing the world building is interesting but not the best out there maybe it is just my opinion if you like the power system them this novel is for you
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I liked it a lot, being a strong supporter of the maids but unfortunately it's over for me, what can I say I hate the yuri in the harem, especially here I feel like the mc is getting ntr by his maid, in short so disappointing it should at least be said in the summary, I don't mind it's a threesome but here bruhh anyway it's chap 150 for info ?
I just want to say while it's still early change the storage 'ring' cause when he grows up it's weird how a ring for a 5 yr old will still fit, sure magic and all that but it's weird, other than that the story's good
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Honest Rating 4.At the time of this review 28 chapters have been written.I'm the author and I truly believe that I've made something special from the new system that took me some time to come with to the streaming experience being shown in word form.Character design and story development are the best I've ever done since I started writing as an author.I think I balanced the dad life and fame life pretty well though this is a review after 28 chapters.Protagonist is a confident, smart, humble but he still has his flaws that will go away as he grows. I lose stars in update stability, pacing and world background which has always been my weakest pointsAlso grammar is a slight problem as I'm kinder dumb. You'll see little mistakes like using the wrong "There" and an odd placement of commas with some other common mistakes.With that being said I think this
The grammar is good with almost no mistakes.The sentence flow is not the best. This makes the story a chore to read at points.I found myself skipping over some of the cultivation explanations. Nothing innovative that makes these cultivation sections worth reading.The story is well thought out. The book is generic at the beginning, but becomes an interesting read later on.I recommend the book for xianxia readers looking for a new novel.This also a decent book for those who want to get into xianxia and don’t want to start reading a 1000 chapter book.This story has nothing unique or mold-breaking that would make non-xianxia readers interested.With all that said, I personally look forward to new chapters.
Yeah.. none of these new novels look good. out of this batch. This one looks like the best I'll give it a shot. I admit all these Video Game novels are getting annoying but that's because there are no good ones or the translations don't follow through to the end.. I think a non harem video game with a bit plot would be nice.
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it's an interesting story so far, pretty decent, chaps are a bit short tho, and seeing caps lock on all ur titles along in the author note hurts my brain istg
An interesting novel! I must admit I was taken at the first chapter and hooked ever since, the writers prose is fluid and easy to read whilst describing things in colourful strokes. Bravo! can't wait for more chapters.