I like this story so I'll recommend it to those who are looking for a good yuri fic that also has a decent enough plot. It's not all mindless and I like how the author is taking the time in establishing roles
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Same weird comedy that's abundant in the original Chinese webnovels is again used in an original novel! The overuse of "misunderstandings" trope is so much that it got unbearable atleast for me. I understand the title of the novel is not a cultivator but still is the MC going to stay a mortal all his life hiding behind others? He gets stabbed by his crazy yandere fiance and he can't do **** to even stop or protect himself as he's a mortal trash. That yandere ***** should be killed first. Everyone misunderstands the MC for even the tiniest things. There are hit fan favourite comedy or action/cultivation novels that use this trope a lot but they are applied more naturally. The MC gets to faceslap everyone but here the MC gets slapped either way. His father a prestigious clan leader couldn't get his son a couple of strong & reliable bodyguards. No he had to get two complete dumbasses that are weak & don't care about their duty. They give a small reason but after all the issues that they had caused they should have been executed. Really in such a world which clan wouldn't have shadow forces or secret strong bodyguards for the leader & young master of the clan? The guy couldn't just get him some absolutely loyal bodyguards that would be willing to take their own lives before revealing the truth about the MC's crippled/mortal status. Well it's my personal opinion and I'm dropping the novel. If anyone doesn't like some of the same things that I mentioned then you would be better off reading someother novel. But if you like this kind of comedy and would like to see how the MC is going to get out of all his troubles then please read. I know some like it. I appreciate the author's effort. Thank you.
pretty good ,please don't make her start selling underwear or at least make someone else take care of the production process while she remains anonymous.
I remembered this novel's author is a Netorare sadistic writer. Even if the MC has 10 women, half of them are either stolen, commit suicide, raped, cheat him, die or chose a different path of his but the author makes it as the MC being the weak and blamed for the girls' relations Don't come crying for not being warned, I was the same innocent guy like you when I read one of his other works and even now I have a deep dislike when I see the Thousent Sorrow name.
Don’t really have much faith in this novel considering the author’s other novels were garbage and had horrible translation. The author can’t even keep the information/plot consistent so nothing ever makes sense.
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The syntax and formatting are almost as bad as MTL. I can't read it. Takes me right out of the story. Another thing I noticed is that instead of role-playing each character the writer makes it incredibly cliche. Young master cliche. It's just not very good. Keep at it, man. Get a development editor and some proofreaders. Use Google Docs and Grammarly.
just a good book overall if you can get though the grammar and spelling that they have but other then that it's a well written book?????