I guess it would have been great if you have divided paragraphs into multiple parts, it would have been easier to comment and read.Please use " text " for what people are speaking.Use ' text ' for inner thoughts.Use [ text ] for system replies.And please decrease the usage of word LOL.I feel story would have been great if it isn't overly OP at start, I like OP characters but the MC here is overly OP, he has 40 dragon eggs and 3 dragons within 10 chapters and he has Harry Potter cast too with him.
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Great brother. He is my big brother. And I admire him. I know him. He is very poor person. So I hope you give him some money. We are working together in a company. He got fired last week from the company.
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When you have finished reading the first chapter (which is where the story begins), you will be left wondering what took place because the story is rather original, the writing is excellent, there are no errors, and the plot is really intriguing.I love how the main character (MC) was designed to have a one-of-a-kind personality with a pinchof craziness.I am excited to readthe rest of this story.
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First off, I read a story about a Panda; a frog; a dog, and even a Lilypad. Also a tree. Here's one about a Bamboo. How could I ever. Anyways, I love the story and all the others you create; but this one specifically is so engaging. It screams you 100%. Keep it up and keep making us smile. I could get lost in this book.
Of course, being the one who wrote this novel, I'll shamelessly give this novel full ratings before others start reviewing it ;) With regards to rating it, you can be as harsh as possible, I won't mind! I do the same in the comments when I read other novels because I enjoy the art so much. Anyways, thank you so much for reading the novel! I don't think you understand how much it means to have others enjoy something you created through your own sweat and tears. If someone who knows about formatting can help me with fixing it on here, that'd be awesome. Also, if you guys want a wiki, feel free to ask and I'll oblige. The main character is a combination of my own self but also what I dream of from a main character. Constantly evolving, actually smart, shameless, cautious, and self-critical. I also added the system because I feel like that best embodies what I wish I had in my daily life! Hopefully, this character and the way they grow is something you find enjoyable. Anyways, I know this is a bit cliche, but I really really really thank you guys for taking the time out of your day to read the novel! I'll do my best not to disappoint you. Cheers!
Finally am on holiday can finally get this book completed, my first attempt in writing its based on my life tho, the ending would be unpredictable but I'll finish this story
Thanks author, very cool. ?Interesting story concept, can't wait to see what happens! I hope you dont this story. I want to at least see tanks run over knights before you give up.Thanks!
This story got potential.. Storyline is good. So far, world building still a little messy but it getting better. I like it......................................... Aaa............ Lot..........................................................................
This is really good keep up the good work people like this are meant to be given a chance in the writing industry ...?❤️wish you the best boo